I love your writing; it has some of the best grammar I’ve seen so far. The plot is very well done so far, and all the characters are accurate. Great job!

I know this is years late, but a small correction:
Saturn was the Roman version of Kronos, the god (technically Titan) of time. Ceres was the Roman goddess of agriculture.

I think eve will have to rethink in which person confess secrets

I realise it's been many years since this story has been finished, but I simply couldn't resist the urge to review. I adore your writing style, and I've always had a soft spot for Remus John Lupin. I've been searching for a proper Remus John Lupin fanfiction and - don't get me wrong - the majority of the stories I've read have been all lovely, but your story in particular is just brilliant and so well-written. Literally every chapter, and the pacing flowed so smoothly. You have a lot of potential as an author. I wish you well.

Hello! So I know this was posted YEARS ago. But I am picky when it comes to fan fiction, so I dug and dug until I found one I thought would be interesting. Which was what I found out to be an understatement. This. Is. Amazing. You are an extremely talented writer and I want to thank you for writing this lovely and enthralling piece of fan fiction. I have dedicated HOURS to reading this. Remus has always been my favorite character out of the entire series and I haven't read a story where he is captured perfectly. Bravo! I hope you continue your writing. Whether it's just for fun or if you write as a professional, just please keep it up. Thank you :)

Oh ya it was Woofie I love him...

Ok thank you for the reply, I understand that you have got kids, husband... Can't wait for the next chapter to come up UR a really great writer!

I desperately want someone like Remus, you portrayed him so wonderfully it pained me to read this

I can't believe Severus grabbed Lily's bum. And then - "Oh, that's a memory for the pensieve!" ...I never knew he had it in him.

What if Harry came across that memory in his Occulmency lessons?
Harry: "Wait. What? You grabbed my mum's butt? Oh, no! My eyes! My eyes! Where's the bleach?!"

But turning a guy pink... that was cruel.

Eve obviously doesn't have much experience with people with migraines. Even excluding the werewolf factor I'm rather irritable when I have headaches and migraines are a million times worse.

The Earth does have another name: Terra. After the Roman goddess of the earth.
(Other names for the goddess Terra are Tellus or Terra Mater.)

Bloody hell, your responses to the reviews are longer than the chapters themselves.

Eep! Oh my Merlin, this is so good! This story- hands down -is my favorite Remus Lupin fan-fiction ever!

Hi!
I just wanted to say how amazing this story is! It's really well written and there are no obvious cliches as well which is really refreshing. I absolutely love the way you went about the whole werewolf sitch, as normally everyone who writes fic tend to have their characters act like it's a totally normal thing and aren't fazed by it at all and act like it's a totally normal day. This is so different and has such a big twist and it really looked like at first that she wasn't going to accept Remus. I absolutely love this fic and want to thank you for writing it. You've really made my day. This is bloody brilliant and i hope you keep writing in the future!
Love Lou xxx

I LOVE how Eve is the more confident one in the relationship, it's different, yet perfect.