Well that was a bunch of both shitty angst and characterization for no pay-off.

Poor Kisame.

You know in this fic when it comes to Naruto's bonds with Team 7, and possibly the rest of Team Kakashi there is part of a song that fits the moment from Wax Fang's Majestic. "If you're searching the lines for a point Well, you've probably missed it There was never anything there In the first place."

Well you said you would never abandon this story in one of your ANs; liar c: if you do decide to continue; could you move things along faster? Ya know, timeskips and such

Those author comments in the middle of the story are pretty annoying, it seems like there's some every chapter, feels a bit like the author is screaming for attention, thereby completely breaking the immersion.

Hope you havey abandoned story really loving it

Dude please tell me you are still doing this story cuz i love it! I cant get enough so please continue!

Dude please tell me you are still doing this story cuz i love it! I cant get enough so please continue!

Really the fatass and ino

"Naruto sees what everyone thinks of him and is shocked, hurt and angry. He leaves Konoha, trying to show them he can be strong. He joins Akatsuki, knowing they can help with the destruction of Konoha."

EVERYONE? What about Teauchi and Ayame? And your Naruto refuses to know what Jiraiya and Tsunade thought of him? What about Shizune's opinion? So he would just completely trust a demon showing him those visions without even giving the others like the ones mentioned above a chance? Your portrayal of Naruto is the worst I've ever seen. You combined his negative traits with Sasuke's and Inari's. Instead of just being the loud mouth stupid idiot, he's now a stupid gullible emo idiotic pussy. Congratulations, you just won over 9000 internets... NOT! I'm actually relieved you're not updating this anymore because your idea for this story SUCKS!

holy megga mamma! this story is addicting ive been reading it on my phone. my computer crashed T_T... id love to see hinata and naruto confront each other and it get all dramatic and all ...i love me some NARUHINA! YEAH YEAH FOREVER! sorry airhead moment that was my super scary inner fangirl o well i definetly hope you continue my lord! please meme me wantsta know what happens! please make Garaa eat a giant chocolate chip cookie! please!

put up unreal destiny but can naruto get a Bloodline limit or Kyuubi power like gaara has Shakakus sand

i donth know why the hell yous stopped but ireallt hope you continue someday challas

you need to make your words flow better you make it confusing at times in the story i found myself having to re-read some parts throughout the story so far cause it didnt makes sense the way you worded it just be careful when writing lol good story tho take care

Great story, shame it hasn't been updated in quite some time.