awwww i loved thisssss

awww! the was soooo beuatiful! loved it!

This was entirely spectacular. I could feel my heart racing when i read this, anticiapating every paragraph. I thought this was very well written for a doujin, and i really like how you built up to the lemony goodness, rather than diving straight into it. Your diction created a beautiful sorrow tone around Allen and Kanda and the darkness that surrounds the entire Man series. You stuck very well to the story and perpetuated alot of the storyline with it. The way the lotus played into the entire oneshot was fantastic. I adore your style of writing and i will, most defenitely, read more from you

Awww this is was happy and sad and gahh. I loved it. c:

I really enjoyed this fic.

I like the fact that the story didn't have an excessive amount of angst; that fact alone, I think, made this story so much nicer

so keep up the good work

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I love the drama!

Love this!

Both Kanda and Allen eyes colors are wrong. kanda is a cruel and selfish lover for not preparing Allen. Allen is stupid for just taking that kind of abuse. If my lover did that, I would reflexively punch or kick his face. What did he think his lover is..

best lemon EVER!

beautifully sad ! as "A cry from the Heart".

That was just amazing. I can't remember if I've already reviewed this, but by all means, here's another!

This is just a beautifully written piece, I love it!

This story made me so happy -hearts fly everywhere- Keep writing because you write so well and such... Ya that came out corny... I'm gunna go... Read more of your stuff now -grin-

it started so sad but the ending was great! i really like your writing style... and i really loved this fic! :D

One word: LOVE!

FIANLLY YAY FOR YULLEN! but this is sad

best part :

“I love you too, Moyashi…don’t ever leave me…”

That part was so cute!. .X3... And the way Allen snuggled himself to kanda is just so cute!.. :3

keep writing!.. X3