I enjoyed this. Well done!

Good story.

Nice potential. :3

Wow. Just . . . wow...!

Love it! simple and well-written.

I enjoyed this story alot

Interesting...

-Arciere

Wow

erm...this has turned awfully rapey for something labeled romance

oh how cute 3 glad i found this fic

that was great! the writing was very well, simple, everything that was needed. i really loved this story! you have a perfectly balance Jareth- not evil but somewhat dark, funny...incorrigable. my fav parts are when he made her sit on the cushion next to his throne, and when she jumped off the stairs and he caught her. awesome job! and i'm so going to check out the dark Jareth of yours, because that IS more my cup of tea Or rather, my vial of poison.
AWESOME JOB!

Sarah is gonna be like O_O

Good news! You now have exactly 100 reviews for this story! :D

More good news: I'M IN LOVE WITH IT.

I seriously just sat here and read the whole thing in one sitting, and honestly, it might be the best Labyrinth fan fiction I've ever partaken of. Your characterization is near flawless; I felt like I was reading the script to the movie's sequel or something. Really, I mean it. This was wonderfully plotted, written, and thought out. I kinda wish we found out what happened to Toby...I mean, gee, the kid's starting to look like a Jareth clone. And he knows. That plot bunny needed some more limelight...but you know, I can live without it.

Again, wonderful job! 3 :D

i love it keep up the great work

0.0 That can't be it!