poor Momo

somewhat of an emo story but it seems to fit so well.

very sad

I really liked this oneshot. Oneshots are pretty difficult, at least I think so, and the perspective you took the story from was quite interesting. Bravo also on using first person. :D

Great job! I hope you write more~

I love it! So sad :(

She didn't actually die, but she almost did. I hate Aizen so much. When we dissected frogs in science I named mine after him.

I guess in this one-shot, hinamori is kind of thick-headed. Why should she die? Hitsugaya is still there for her, ready to help her and support her, as a friend, as family. Why can't she see that? Hitsugaya cares for her so much, yet she belittles it in a way because all she really cares about right now is Aizen's betrayal and how she wants to die... I mean she was really loyal to him but Hitsugaya is her childhood friend, someone who always stayed by her side... I call that being thick-headed... but I still feel bad for Hinamori anyway because she gave so much loyalty to Aizen yet he killed her with a sadistic glee. DAMN AIZEN, TEME!

So sad... I almost cried... *sniff*

I'm sorry but I hate Momo so stories where she dies excite me! xD

That was sad and touching and beautifully written. Poor Hinamori...

Beautifully written, I've always wanted to write something like this, only from Hitsugaya's point of view.

This was a great one-shot. I love all of the works that you have put up so far. Please continue to write. This one was different but it was still great.