Reviews for One in a Million
xXlKairilXx chapter 21 . 8/12/2018
Not sure how active you still are but I just want to share my gratitude with you. Looking at the date, this story started in like 2009 right? If I time myself correctly I probably first bumped into it in 2011 or so. I first read it then and saved it (I’m trash for never reviewing but I was so young I was scared to make any digital footprint) and even went back to reread it a year or two ago. Here I am a third time, I just finished giving the story a third go. As I went through the first few chapters I would remember events and instead of thinking “ohh yeah I remember this, eh I’ll move on to another story,” I actually just felt twice as excited to keep going.

I read this story the first time back in 4th or 5th grade, and now as an 18 year old about to start my freshman year of college, I still felt, laughed, cried, and overall reacted incredibly to this story. I remember looking over another old favorite that hadn’t aged well with me, it wasn’t a bad piece but I could see the child-like sillyness in it. However, with this story, it felt just as good reading it this time as it had the first. My second go-through somehow left me thinking that Hysteria was the finale. Sora’s last words just felt like an acceptable, although short, ending that I was okay with. I hadn’t realized that I don’t think that was planned to be the ending, right?
Either way, I’d love to see an update if there was meant to be one or if the possibility exists, but I love this story no matter what. Thank you for sharing what exists whether that was it or not.
SapphireNova24 chapter 1 . 10/22/2017
Ooh! I love this pairing and this starting chapter!
Fifth Distraction chapter 21 . 10/20/2016
Oh my God I love your writing so freaking much I'm a seventeen year old dude and now I'm squealing like a little girl and rolling all over because just AHH! I love it! I love you! This is so perfect in every freaking way imaginable!
Aaron chapter 12 . 5/17/2016
Amazing. Simply. Amazing
Yuki Hikari Strife chapter 21 . 12/3/2015
OMG FINALLY THEY ARE A FUCKING COUPLE!
Yuki Hikari Strife chapter 18 . 12/3/2015
Wait you have a sora plushi? wow cool
sokailuver70 chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
i rely rely rely hope u still continue...i kno 2 late 4 any reviews but 4 gods sake i only started reading dis fanfics recently...hahahaha
sokailuver70 chapter 20 . 12/23/2013
i rely luved ur story... its rely cute atleast it excluded all those cliches and so on... its admirable
candybear24 chapter 21 . 1/20/2013
i HATE it that you ended it right here so start finishing
race41 chapter 21 . 9/9/2012
AWESOME STORY! GREAT JOB! ;)
xoxprincessxox chapter 21 . 2/8/2011
awwwww!
simplyjennxD chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
HAHAHAHAHAHA. OMG. You would not believe this! Okay, so I got a new phone (finally!) with internet and all these other useless complicated crap, but besides that, so I have internet access all the time now! I'm finally a senior (hohoho) in high school, and I'm FINALLY done with my annoying ass college applications (FINALLY)! So during class, where none of us are doing anything, I've been on facebook 24/7. Then I decided to go to fanfic for old sake's time, and I was reading over your old stories (which are STILL mind-blowingly amazing) and I remember we use to write each other SUPER long reviews. So I go to check it out, and HAHAHAHA. Omg, I laughed sooooo hard! Like crazy! We wrote each other ESSAYS! They weren't reviews, they were basically ESSAYS with the topic along the lines of something like "What is crystalnami trying to convey or portray about the coupling SoraxKairi when she writes the loopholes and twists that no one else predicts? What does this foreshadow? Give examples through the text and do not forget to include literary elements." Our reviews basically answered ALL those questions from above! Hahaha! It's so funny because everyone else who reviews are like "Good story!" or, "I love this story, you have beautiful handwriting! or "You rock!" and out of all those short reviews it's just like BOOM. ESSAY. Hahaha.

And also, we kept talking about S and R and I can't believe...wow! So much has changed! But hey, if you're still up for the whole living in Manhattan together with 80 cats when we're old and have no one, then I'm so for it too haha. I'll always be here in the city, so you should get your ass over here too! And Frida Kahlo! Hahahaha. Remember how we completely SCREWED up our myspaces with those pictures of ditto and koolaid? My friends were all like, "Wtf did you do with your myspace?" but I couldn't stop laughing, hahaha. THAT'S how old it's been since I've been on this site- people were still using MYSPACE. Haha. I still can't believe how naive we were about S and R though! I actually went to the Jingle Ball with S recently (I think I told you about it) and it was just the two of us, and it was AWESOME. We started singing along with Paramore and Katy Perry (SO FUNNY) and he just started dancing at one point, and I couldn't stop laughing. It was then that I realized I REALLY like him as a friend, and idk why I was so obsessive over him as a guy! Maybe in my heart I still like him as a guy, but my feelings of him as a friend are way stronger. I'm really glad that I really liked him, though, because that's how I got close to you. We're so much stronger now and I'm so glad for it! It was hard to understand two years ago, but now I realize that if it doesn't work out, it wasn't meant to be. Besides, we'll be in college soon! Can you imagine the people that we'll meet during college? It'll be a crazy experience! You better be there for me for my college experiences too! I might even visit England really soon, so I'm psyched about that!

Besides the point, this story is SO good! It sucks that you aren't finishing it. My stories are all pretty crappy, so it's fine that mine aren't finished, but yours are REALLY good. You should complete them! Remember how we hated authors who didn't complete their work? Now we turned into them haha. I know, I know...no motivation. Sigh, this sucks. But you really like writing, right? So I think you should continue doing what you like to do. Haha. C:

Btw I got a snow day today!(MAD random) It's been snowing so much in NY lately, I wonder what's up. Anyways, I've been rambling on for too long. Talk to you soon! I hope this review made your day!

- LOVE Jenn.
What is this I don't even chapter 21 . 4/26/2010
YES YES SHE FINALLY UPDA- Oh wait that was last year...
xTwichii chapter 21 . 4/1/2010
It took me such a long time to get from chapter one to your most recent chapter, but in the end I must say it was definately worth it. This story is pretty darn amazing. I love it! Your ideas just flowed so nicely together and the developement of Sora and Kairi's relationship was just planned out so nicely.

I gave myself some time to think of the events that happened with Sora and Kairi and they were all planned out and placed well throughout the whole story. The transitions of emotions were barely noticable because you made them flow so nicely together.

I really hope that you continue writing this story (especially since I see you haven't updated since almost a year ago)
MHplayer749 chapter 21 . 1/25/2010
You described the part where they kiss so well! GREAT STORY PLOT YOU ALSO HAVE AS WELL!
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