beautiful, and you portrayed Konan very well! :P

She's not OOC at all. I don't think that at this point she can be OOC; we don't know much about her.

Anyway, it's a vicious circle. She takes lives to live and get noticed by Pein, the one who orders her to take those lives. Another dark one that is so amazing I almost fell out of my chair while reading.

Pein 'n' Konan all the way baby!

I've never seen Konan's character portrayed in the manga or anime but I imagine you got her character rather well. I imagine a P 'n' K relationship would be rather like that. hm...

Have a nice day.

Narkness.

Aw poor Konan, I do feel bad for her! Stupid Pein...YOU LOVE HER IDIOT! XD

Great one-shot!

~ihearttoast09~

This is really good! I really like the last line.

Wow, that was really nice! I didn't think it was OOC at all; I'm sure that it's something akin to the truth. It was short, but it was better that way. Great job!

Very nice. Short, but nice.

I don't think you made her too OOC... we don't know THAT much about her.