these're some great ideas you have here. I'm really curious now, continue it, pretty please?

very nice... it sure is original. I'd love to see some ryuuk, kira conversation, and some more L maybe? And i'm curious about what powers he has now? He can judge, fly, see names and life span, shapeshift between L and him...and? Doesn't sound more mighty than an shinigami so far. And will he fight against bullet? I'm curious :D

yay i like this story :) plz keep it going!

YOU’RE asking whether or not this is a believable continuation? Um...let me think about that... YES! Believe me, you have absolutely no tribulations with that little issue, in fact this has got to be one of the best fics I've ever read! If I get rich or go into government and use my resources to buy the rights to death note you will be one of the first people I shall consult when constructing the plot. Believable continuation, Humph...

OK, now I've finally reached the end of posted chapters, and I have to say I like your plot.

You have made your characters real, with their virtues and faults, and it was a pleasant surprise to see you have even used my sister's name for one of them. It's a unique one so I've never encountered it in fanfiction before :) Also, it's refreshing to read a story where the location is not set in US.

Light being able to change his appearance due to being shackled to L was a curious touch, will L ever be able to regain a body of his own?

Kurk obviously saw Light in his shinigami form although he had not touched his death note. Can Light become visible to any human at will or only death not users? And can any human gain possession of Lynn as a death note?

As you can see your fic has sparked a lot of questions, I hope that you'll find the time to post another chapter soon :)

Light is lucky it's not L that's his death note, otherwise there would be of no hope of killing anyone.

Pantheon eh? I'm sure Light would have wanted to rather hear about panthenol, what with his burned wrists.

wow. at least light has finally gotten around to kurk. and where's L? this is a really interesting idea and i love all your characters! amazing work

I like how Kurk didn't act very smart when he met Kira, and Ryuuk's reaction to Kira. I would have thought that Kira would dislike Ryuuk more, though...

Oh, jeez, I have to wait another chapter for the confrontation? *sigh* Cliffies kinda bug me.

Please update soon!

OMFG u have not updated in like a year it feels like but anyway great chapter. I am guessing the whole sayu thing might forshadow she might see Light again or were u giving us readers an update on her sad condition. The poor girl. I feel for her. And kurk should have been more respectful to Light. But then again i love Light so i would think that. Wonder why he left lynn with kurk and ryuk? guess i will find out next time - glad your back Update soon!

I read the whole story up to this point. Its very good, don't stop!

This story is awesome! I'm looking forward to the meeting, its proablly gonna screw up, which would be quite entintaining!(urgh... spelling)

Keep up the awesome work!

Bo: great chapter! Woot more time with L! Even if its a tiny bit. Still, Lynn is so cute! Wanna hug him. xD

Ski: Hmm... wonder how that is going to play into events now with Noah being able to see Ryuuk. Aww, I hope he doesn't die. *sighs* Update again son please!~ I can't wait to see what happens next with the others at the shinigami world!

at the end there light was acting a little like L

Now this... is a truly beautiful story. When my eyes caught the summary, I knew that this one would be different. So far, this fic has left me with an odd sense of breathlessness I don't think I have ever experienced before, which is saying quite a lot for I have read hundreds of fanfictions.

There are a few places where typos pop up, but nothing really annoying. The only thing I would recommend is putting a line break of some sort when you change scenes. Sometimes I had to really pay attention or I would get confuzzled. xD Other than that though, this is an excellent story with an original plot, and the flow is absolutely breathtaking. In fact, I almost felt like I was in a dream. But, enough of my rambling, I'm sure you have other things to do. Keep writing, and I hope this motivates you! D