That was a great story. You even got me confused about the shooting. I like it.

Great Story!

This was so dumb.

What were the adults doing? How did no one over-power an 8 year old girl? Where were all the security cameras?

I love this story, you had me on the edge of my chair for every chapter :D This story has a Battle Royale feel to it if you know what I mean :)

Whoa, I was NOT expecting the killer to be Francine! This was awesome from start to finish and had me on the edge of my seat.

Oh no!

Love it!

i thought for sure the killer was D.W

Just so you know, my friend and I started reading this story before the final chapter was even up, and I was hooked. (And that's saying something because your stories are the only horror stories I've ever read! Even though, I love Arthur!) The killer was actually one of my guesses (I'm not saying who it is, that way I don't spoil it for anybody!). Amazing job, and keep up the great work!

I really liked the premise of this story. Sure the killer's motives were kinda vague and I didn't like how the police didn't attempt to protect ANY of the kids inside of the class. However I can easily forgive that and some of the spelling errors. The story was fun.

This is sick and twisted and weird.

wow...I was rightXD Francine was the killer and somehow I saw this comingawesome story

I see..he thinks its Jenna because it's always the quiet onesXD you can't trust them lolz

reason for the constant use of hook? the killer cut it off...I'm sure of it...(I'm just saying my theory idk how this thing ends this is my 1st time reading it)

*ponders* somethings fishy...just a severed hand and did she see Francine being dragged? also did they find her body?

*ponders more* That's it I dub Francine as the killer...I've watched alot of NCIS and also Detective Conan so I say its Francine based off of some episodes I've seen..