so good!

Thank you for this amazing story, really enjoyed it.

You just had Ichigo issue a rape threat. What. Just what. sigh I was really liking this fic despite it not aging well and I really, really wanted to continue with it but this...this isn't what I signed up for.

Your writing and pace is fantastic and it's truly a shame that I can't continue with this fic..please consider re-writing that dialogue if you can.

Fantastic fic. And really terrific writing. Only problem...I am reading this in the tail-end of 2018 and...ah...your fic hasn't aged well, I am sorry. I don't blame you and I am not flaming you. I am just telling it like it is. In light of, consent unless freely given is not consent at all, and no means no and not convince me, this fic comes across as very non-consensual and...as sexual assault. Just saying. I really do love the pace of the story you have set though.

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I knew it. I wrote in my last review that while reading chapter two I thought Aizen must be the killer. And around 15 chapters later its revealed.
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Aizen was the killer all along . I told you. I'm proud of myself now. And now to praising the author. Its a really good story. Its well written and thought out. Keep up the good work.

I'm only 2 chapters into this story and I already call that Aizen is the murderer. I'll post another review when the murderer is revealed. But its a great story so far.

Aaaaawwwww! To AMAZING! I love the ending. I love how that moment of bravery escalated to something true that needed to come out. So awesome, so cute. Poor Rana, I'm glad Rukia helped out the way she did. No wonder she kept pulling at her vest, lol. So awesome! :) Rangiku would be proud. :) Oh, btw, I don't know if I missed it, but whatever happened to Tosen...? lol. I also forgot to mention that in that chapter where Renji doubted Rukia was so much like the original story line and how Ichigo stood by Rukia no matter what. This story has a lot from the original. It's a nice touch. :) Rangiku would of been proud of Rukia for helping Rana out. Yumichika would of been happy to see Rukia much more happier. To bad we did not get to see Shunsui in that court room to witness Aizen going straight to jail. Other then some of these, this story was so lovely and so was Kenpachi's poor self and all the caught losers having to witness Ichigo and Rukia at it. lol. XD I'll be definitely making fan art. Hope you see it one day... Thank you for the lovely story. :) Until next time! :)

Aaahhhh... Mother fucking Aizen goes straight to jail, lmao. XD That was so cute how she calls him a crazy bastard as she accepts him as her fiancee. :D 3 So lovely! Right after court, hell yeah I'll marry him, lmao. XD Poor Yama and Kenpachi, lol. That was a cute references of a trio bond between Ichigo, Rukia, and Kenppachi. How she feels safe with both of them. :) So funny and cute. :) T_T So happy. LOVE this chapter!

FINALLY! No bs, lol... XD It's about time my girl accepted her happiness. :) 3 That asshole Ulquiorra, lol, he's even cold to that dirt bag, Aizen. lol. That was so awesome how Ichigo was there to support Rukia and how she finally admitted her love to him, in front of a court too, lmao. AWESOME! The shit I live for. I feel like I'm watching Law & Order. :) Love that show and love this chapter, with poor Rukia getting smacked around with the common sense of her relationship with Ichigo. :) Yama can be so one-sided as usual, lol. GREAT CHAPTER.

UGH...RUKIA AND HER FRONTING...as usual, lol... Ugh, so mad and sad...poor Ichigo... After all those beautiful reactions between them both... ugh... and that ass wipe Ulquiorra... Poor Ichigo...

OMG...! The "I love you." from Ichigo was so cute! Ugh... Her waking up with a SMILE! Ugh... BEAUTIFUL. 3 :D lol, that whole scene with Yama, Ulquiorra and Hitsugaya was perfect and funny. Bitch ass Ulquiorra will be dissapointed, but oh well, lol... XD Such a good chapter. Perfect depiction to how Retsu U. is. :) lol, poor Kenpachi, actually doing work, lmao... XD Onto a trial? :D That hi and smile, highlight of the chapter. :)

Ugh, lol, that fire was intense. XD With it being Aizen, I thought he could of wanted more then just killing, but it can work for him too. I love the way this chapter was build. It was all well organised and everything made sense. lol, and we got the answer to the badge, poor Byakuya. :( Poor Rukia, made to cry for Ichigo. Poor Ichigo, almost accepting despair without Rukia. Reminds me of one of their favorite quotes. Awesome chapter. :) Glad Kenpachi got everyone to work. lol.

Poor Rukia... :( That line about how Ichigo's hold makes her forget about how evil the world was, was so beautiful... 3 :) Forgot to mention that the last chapter had a scene from Death Note, the false bottom of the drawer. lol. Awesome. Oh, Aizen the snake... lol... The kiss, with the teenagers as witnesses, priceless. lol. Good thing I reached this story late, no cliffhanger for me, lol, great cliffhanger regardless. Hope Rukia gets her revenge, along side Ichigo. :) Poor Ichigo...

This chapter gave me anxiety in a good way, lol, if that makes any sense. XD That whole part with Rukia breaking into Aizen's house was exciting. I have to say, Ichigo's words towards Rukia about her brother not being the only cold one kind of stung, lol, it's good to make the readers feel this intensity, lol. Great job. :) The title of this chapter suits it well. ; :) Russian singing, creepy... lol...

...Oh snap! My suspicions were true, lmao. XD Classic! Love it! :D This chapter was awesome. Even thought it confused me a bit. I know you probably won't respond, but... Was Rukia supposed to be in danger on her birthday? On that weekend with Ichigo? Start with a Kuchiki, end with a Kuchiki? This chapter had me confused, lol... Like a scene was cut off... IDK... XD Regardless, awesome chapter. Rukia resigning, cute jealousy, and the one classic thing we all get from Ichigo, of him missing his light, his angel, lol. XD Did Aizen really feel upset about Rukia wanting to leave? That part with Rukia visiting her brother's grave was very lovely. :) T_T lol, in truth, Tatsuki can be more cold then Rukia, but I could see Tatsuki claiming otherwise... _ I wonder what Aizen wants from Rukia in this story... lol. XD That photo was quite interesting. :) Nice cliff hanger. Poor Ichigo, on a stakeout, lol. Poor Rukia, being teased by Kenpachi, both Ichigo and Rukia should have their moments of payback with him. lol. XD ; Great chapter!