The End :-(

Awww :)

Omg i loved your story so mich the last two chapters made me cry

Omg, i just read all 24 chapters and IT IS AMAZING! Best story line ever with a little thing going on btwn morgan and jj! I totally ship them. You did not over do it, it was perfect. And the fact that you made them sound exactly depicted in the actual show is the best! Its so real-like! LOVE LOVE LOVE

Wow! Amazing story I've not stopped crying since Morgan died. You are an amazing writer!

I loved the story but how could you kill of morgan my baby :( your really good at writing story's more jj and morgan fics, I cried

Love the story

Wait was she raped? That part was very unclear. I like the story a lot though!

Hay,
your story is realy good!
In the end I cried! It's so sad but also a beautiful ending, thank you!

Jojolinchen

*sorry for my bad english, i'm german

Hi :)

I found a link to your fanfiction in a German Criminal Minds forum (kind of 'Fanfiction recommendations' ) and well ... I spent the past three hours reading it :)

This story definitely deserves a real feedback, though everything I am going to write now could be cut down to "WOW!" - but this would not be enough for 24 chapters of brilliancy!

This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read - probably it is even the best one!

You made me smile, laugh, shiver, sigh, scream ...

The story is soo realistic, especially 'your' protagonist's features fantastically match the Criminal Minds - character's ones! (i hope, this sentence makes any sense... What I want to express is, that you did a very good job trying to "imitate" the "real" character's characters :D )

... oh damn ...

Maybe I should have really cut that down to "WOW!" instead of trying to create grammatically correct English sentences in a mental state somewhere between "emotionally carged" and "very very tired" ...

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well, I guess having written these chaotic sentences does not allow it now to "criticise" 'your' 'you're' mistake or the fact that you did not use one single comma during these 42,249 (!) words, but otherwise I did not want to disregard that ...

However,
the substance is much more important than commas,
and since the substance of your fanfiction is AWESOME, one could definitely conclude that your whole Fanfiction is absolutely readable (despite of any mistakes as far as grammar or punctuation is concerned).

Admiring greetings,
Saskia from Germany

write more on jjandmorgan they are great love the story.

this is the first time that i have read story like this and cried. it was great from beginning to end. powerful story and great writing.

Oh No! I am such a sook! I cried! No! Lol, it was an excellent fic. Well done. I look forward to more of your fics.. I will read them as soon as my eyes dry up xD.

Oh. My. God.

I guess I had assumed that I finished this story because it was in my favorites, but apparently fucking not! Oh my god. So I guess your story went more in the reality direction, but I LITERALLY cannot remember any fic that I have ever cried this much over. Wow, I don't even know what to say. The whole thing was great, but the end was... I don't even know, you wouldn't even believe how much I cried. I just can't even imagine being in JJ's position... wow.

I feel the need to mention that Morgan would not possibly survived without water for twelve days, let alone four days, but other than that it's a great story so far. I'm looking forward to continuing reading. :)