Bravo, good written over all.

So in the end, Kim and Bonnie are together but Ron and Tara broke up? That is so..unfair. But heck, so is life.

I really liked this chapter. Bonnie is awesome and her family sucks. Hopefully this ends happy and gay

This fic couldn’t get better, lmao

Ron sure is in this a lot. I’m not opposed, kinda hope it’ll be a threesome at some point. Awesome chapter, I’m into it.

This is fucking amazing. Filthy and hot. I know this fic is old as shit but I’m commenting anyways. The writing is really good, the adult scenes are sexy, and the characterization is fully intact and honestly great. Onward to chapter 2.

I wanted more

Oh wow, the ending to this is pretty good.

TBH, and I'm only saying because I think you have a lot of talent and this is a good story, this final chapter is really strong. However, I actually think you make the symbolism a little too literal? The scene with Kim and Amber is really beautiful, but there's a lot of tell instead of show. Rather than have the priest explain everything to Kim, I think you could have condensed the scene more effectively. It's the whole start late, end early thing. Start with Kim and Ron on the mission, end with Amber' death. Cut to the dance. Impact made. Keep it more internal.

I think the other thing I would say is that the best parts of this story are mostly about Bonnie. Kim's stuff comes up more towards the end, but it doesn't really become grounded until this chapter. I think the bits with Dr. Head could have been strengthened just a tad, and again, maybe made a little less literal. Because while the ship itself is really cute, I feel like we're missing a small piece on what actually makes these two so explosive. And if there was just a bit of a deeper dive into Kim, and maybe a bit more character work done with Brian, then it might make a bit more sense.

But really truly, it's a great bit at the end, and the dance scene starts off with such a melancholy (and a callback to the earlier dance) but ends so triumphantly. It's really nice. And honestly I really like the Kim x Bonnie ship, I'm surprised more people don't write it. But I'd say this should like be the standard of that ship. : )

Finally, I hate how most people on this site write Will as a tight ass jerkwad. Because it doesn't really come from the show, it's just his fan-characterization. And while he's not in your fic for very long, I appreciated how bumbling he was lol. It was refreshing. Seriously, killer job.

ugh this fic is actually making me feel really emotional now. I'm happy for them and really excited to see where this goes. I saw some reviews saying it gets really raw with some character stuff and ugh. :')

can u please make a sequel I would love more of these two

it was... is a beautiful ending. and still can't shake the feeling that there should be more... well it is just a feeling and ultimately it's up to u if there's more and in the end I wouldn't be upset if there no sequel or spinoff or whatever but it would appreciated.
so until next time, read'ya

Thank you so much for the wonderful story! This has been the best KiBo I've read to date. Thanks again for the great writing!

That was a beautiful ending.

... Who could POSSIBLY? Who would even be in some random club to give a shit? The mystery is going to bother me for at least seven minutes while I read the next chapter.

This chapter made me laugh, both at the revelation of Renee's previous experience, and at her offer to her husband.