;_; You know I loved this piece a lot. oh jeez, the last couple of lines was such painful agony! (in a good way, of course.) The questioning, the doubt, and the realization of a question that won't ever be answered. I love it XD

Yikes. That's so sad...seriously, I have tears. But it's beautiful too. Wow.

very angsty.

I like it.

*sniffles* Anger? Not so much - more hurt, bitterness, and deep sadness... Nearly made me cry. You really put the finger on the pointlessness of his betrayal - if only he could bring himself to stand up to his inner demons, things could have been so very different. So sad.

Aw that was very good Swims! And very sad too. I guess to the right kind of girl Bishop would be quite the catch but he's got more issues than Carth, Valen and Anomen put togeather! My god I've read a Bishop fic what's wrong with me ;) Seriously though it's very well written and to begin with I thought it was from Bishop's POV but it turned out to be from the KC's very clever. Keep up the good woek Swims!

Regardless of the motivations behind writing it, Swimmy, I'm glad you decided to publish it. It's angry and raw and emotional and very, very good.

*sniff* Swimmy, it's... simply beautiful, and so powerful. I really don't want to say any more so I don't spoil the mood.

My favourite lines are these:

"I fell in love with your eyes, bright and vibrant. I fell in love with your smile, beautiful and scarce. I fell in love with your laugh, wonderful and rare."

"It is amazing how easily steel cuts through human flesh.

Will your blood give me my heart back, Bishop? Will your death give me my life back?"

"The one thing I always tried to give you.

The one thing I never could.

But, like everything you do, it comes with a price.

You are finally happy, but I’ve lost you, my love."

Oh heck, who am I kidding? I love it all. And I'm sorry you felt so angry. *hugs* It feels good to vent any negative emotions through writing though, doesn't it?

I need to go hug my Bishop plushie now. And here's one just for you, Swimmy. *gives you a Bishop plushie*

Oh my Swimmie, that was the saddest thing. I just don't know what to say without sounding trite.

I could feel your hurt, anger, pain all wrapped up. It was beautiful in it's pain.

You just want to scream and hug Bishop all at the same time. Well done, I'm just sorry you felt so badly to have those feelings pour out like this. Hugs to you. :-)