Reviews for The Unfic
Foxy-Floof chapter 6 . 2/4/2014
Well damn. I guess I can't call him Colonel Bastard anymore. He's so slick. *Grumble-grumble-grumble*

And Hughs... Well, I don't know how I feel about that yet. But mature men are so hot.
ThousandxSunny chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
i love the fact that you did both endings. The first ending was so sweet and fluffy, yet i knew it was unrealistic, such as Al having both his correct body and memories, Marta being alive and Gracia being happy with Roy... The second ending was sad...i felt so sorry for Edward and Roy. Disappointed that Al couldn't remember (that's why i seriously preferred Brotherhood ending coz even though Ed lost his Alchemy, he still had everyone), but it was also realistic and the most canon ending...Hughes did die in the end and many people had to be sacrificed for the Elric brothers to be slightly and remotely happy...which is why it's so depressing...but i really liked your story. Not many people have the guts or even want to write a Ed x Maes story (that's why there's such a low number of them out there...:( ). Not only is it hard to write a happy story of a relationship between these two (since Maes is married) but it's also hard to make it seem like it's okay for these two to be together (i never would've thought to make Gracia a friend who married Hughes as a friend) it was a lovely story and i'm glad you gave the readers both a happy and sad ending! So i'd like to thank you for writing such a lovely story! :)
BlackHeart96 chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
Aww! That's so sad. It was a cute story though.
vamplady chapter 11 . 4/20/2010
nu!

why? why did Maes have to die? you have me in tears after reading the last chapter.

loved everything before it.

is there going to be anything new?
IllusionOfAghony chapter 11 . 7/28/2009
I think I liked the first ending better, the second one was sad and made me cry. Great fic, loved it!
simplyEarthian chapter 4 . 6/19/2008
"Roy Mustang is dead sexy.”

“In a mini-skirt."

Ahh, Vic Mignogna...what would we do without you P
Kayla simplyEarthian chapter 11 . 3/27/2008
Ok, I liked the story up until this chapter, I was so confused I didnt even understand half of it. I really liked everything else but to me, this could have been done alot better. I am not trying to sounds mean though so please dont take it that way. .

-Kayla (was just too lazy to sign in)
Pwyll chapter 11 . 3/26/2008
The time skip was unexpected, but okay. I liked how you did the two endings, too, since you could see what happened when Hughes lived, and when he died.
FMA lover912 chapter 11 . 3/24/2008
is the story already over? i liked it very much but it got kinda confusing at the end when you put a time jump in there. i like the second ending bette somehow. its more oif a finish. i really hope that you dont end tyhis fan fic. well hopefully update soon.
Bar-Ohki chapter 11 . 3/22/2008
Powerful and happy.
Pwyll chapter 9 . 3/7/2008
For some reason I always see something like this happening to Maes, not with Ed, though. I guess I'm a fanfiction home wrecker. It usually always centers around Maes hiding his true feelings behind a bogus marriage and lots of pics (I wrote a story like that, but it was super dark and not funny). Anyway, great story, and I like Roy in the story. I liked how you used Gracia too, it was really unexpected and humorous. Keep it up.
FMA lover912 chapter 9 . 2/23/2008
its really good so far and i cant wait to see what happens next will winery ever accept them? i hope so. update soon.
Bar-Ohki chapter 9 . 2/19/2008
Aw! So happily in love! Then something bad's going to happen...
Seeker Zenn chapter 8 . 1/29/2008
a really weird pairing... but really sweet none the less. update!
silkendreammaid chapter 8 . 1/28/2008
grins... I seem to always use Winry as a favourite whipping character.. she has so many uses..

enjoying as always...

silken :)
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