What a waste of my time! I can’t believe I read this until the end. Around ch12 I felt this was going nowhere but it really went nowhere, was full of repeats, no actions and way too much thinking, the same all the time... how frustrating! And it’s marked M but there are only a couple of kisses and Sasuke and Sakura don’t realise they want each other, it’s very poor. I am sorry but I am so disappointed ; I really don’t understand why the other reviews are good! We must have read a different story... and don’t get me started on the end; it feels like the author was like « I am sick of this story, let’s end it here » and then they put an epilogue where Sasuke achieves his goals in like three paragraphs... joke!

I just want to leave you a comment aswell! Because your story definitely deserved it! That's one of the best stories with Sasusaku as pairing here in fanfiction! It's actually my favorite aswell. I hope you will still continue your sequel aswell, because both stories are amazing! Your writing-style is soo beautiful and fluent. And the plot is also on point. The way you described the characters especially Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto is really amazing. It's just really beautiful to see them spending time together and of course the togetherness of Sasusaku is so heartwarming. It' not Oc at all. Their characters in your story is very similar to canon. And that's really hard to find in fanfiction. I personally really like the last few chapters. The scenes between Sakura and Sasuke were really hot and beautifully written. You could feel the sexual tension between them. So sad and heartbreaking, that they have to go separate ways...

do a sequel!

:)

These last two chapters are going to be the DEATH of me. I can literally taste the sexual tension between them, and I'm not even there with them!

Also, Sakura! Listen to Naruto more carefully now. You'll understand what he's talking about later. ;D

~Scarlet

HE'S CAVING. AND I'M EXCITED BECAUSE NARUTO'S ALSO THERE AND HE'S NOT EXCLUDED LIKE HE USUALLY IS.

Also, having them on a 'mission' and bringing in other characters is honestly great. It's so like how the series actually went that I can visualize this perfectly. Aiko's so sweet though! (A tad bit generic but that doesn't matter.) This time, Naruto's not the only one changing lives and leaving impressions!

Loving this character development ~Scarlet

*screaming echoes vaguely in the background*

So. That's my internal distress, manifested into an auditory form. As I type this with a blank smile on my face, the tortured screams of my soul will never forgive nor forget the first chapter of this story.

~Scarlet

Best. Chapter. Ever. Figures it would be almost at the end. Sasusaku making out is my favorite!

I've read this story about 3 times now and really hope that you finish the sequel someday. The stories are amazing. You are really talented.

"moving with a rhythm that could not be heard by anyone but them" that has to be my favourite line of the entire story. i physically sighed as soon as i read the words of his decision to leave. as in, i had to explain to the people around me why i sighed so hard JUST staring at my phone. gotta say, helluva good chapter.

This story was everything I needed. I wish it was a hard copy book cuz I would definitely keep it on me without fail. I felt so many tings. FRom lol, to tears of sadness, to anxiery to suspense to nail biting. U are an incredible writer and I am already lookin at what other literary wonders u have waiting for me ;) Really loved this story

Noooooo! Omg my eyes rite now! Feels!

...Passion!...

Epic! Oh the anticipation!

Muy caliente! xD