Reviews for Meaningless
xcgirl08 chapter 5 . 4/20/2010
I really liked the feel of this little drabble; it's my favorite out of the bunch.

Drawings on foggy glass tend to be aimless, whatever-your-mind-wanders-to sorts of images, and that Edward is present for Winry even then was very nice.

Good work! It's fun to see how you improve as these chapters go along.
just another fma fan chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
Okay, I've got comments for each story this time. They are so beautiful and sad. I love them all.

1)Meaningless: This sounds like something Winry would be thinking in vol 12 when she finally admitts she loves him. It fits nicely. I'm bad at angst, so I admire your writing.

2)Goodnight: It was short and touching really. And your stories were hilarious. I got my dad hooked on it and we watched the whole thing one a week (I recorded it from Adult Swim. heh heh...) My mom walked in during ep 25 at Hughes' funeral when Elicia was crying about them burying her papa. I think that freaked her out...

3)So Far Away: sounds like an after the movie scene. That's why I like the manga better, there's a CHANCE of them being together at least! If you want a nice alternative to the movie, try Winter in Germany on this sight. It's amazing! And honestly, it makes a lot more sense to me that the real CoS plot. -_-'

4)Summer Haze: I love ghost stories! xD touching and sad. Nice writing.

5)Sunday's Fog: I don't see Winry as the artistic type, but it was a nice touch. Also, I took first year Japanese last year, and I can say that it's not as hard as you might think. I'm glad you had with the translator. By the way, do you know what "Sasuke" means in Japanese? Because I could never figure it out! (Although "Neji" means "screw" *the object...sick minds...*)

6)While I Wait: I think this is my favorite. I have always had a soft spot for poems. *wistful smile* not if only I could write one... Anyway, um... I loved it. ;; And the chibi after party was brilliant wasn't it? Soo cute! And the black hayates attacking was the BEST! xDD

Done now. ;;
DemonRaily chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Yey, thanks for updating _
Whyle chapter 6 . 5/17/2008
Hey ! It's me again ! XD !

I'll never forget a fic that i like ! ;)! (forgive me if my English is bad .. T_T)

So, such a wonderful chapter, I love it ! ;) !

It's very well-written ! Thanks a lot ! ;) !

And, update as soon as you can ! XD !
Whyle chapter 5 . 5/17/2008
THAT'S SO CUTE ! XD ! ;) !

But, update quicker please ! XD !

thank you very much !
DemonRaily chapter 5 . 5/16/2008
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Aiiro Hoshi chapter 4 . 4/5/2008
So in Summer Haze...is Ed dead?

D:

But you've got some pretty interesting ideas here for these - although this hasn't been updated for a while, maybe you could post a few more? -grin-

Aiiro Hoshi
Evil Little Dog chapter 4 . 12/28/2007
Poor Winry. I'm confused, though; is she having a dream or a hallucination in the very end? I almost wondered if perhaps she died and hadn't realized it until Ed disappeared.
Whyle chapter 4 . 12/23/2007
TT ... poor Winry, life is not fair !

great chapter ! thanks ! ;)
Inuchemist10 chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
I that it was great, but I really liked your comment about your dad, parents are hysterical aren't they? I'm twenty five and my mother thinks I nuts cos, I into FMA so much, but she does like my art...
Whyle chapter 3 . 12/21/2007
nice chapter ! you're gonna update every day ? cool !

lol !

thank you ! ;)
Whyle chapter 2 . 12/20/2007
lol ! If he had seen Envy ... XD !

update soon, thanks a lot ! ;)

(nice chapter anyway)
AdventureAddict chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
-whimpers- Winry, gimme a hug!

It was sweet. Short, but sweet. I liked how it was accurate to Winry's personality.
Whyle chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
so cute !

continue like that, I love your fic !

thanks, and update soon !