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xcgirl08 chapter 5 . 4/20/2010 I really liked the feel of this little drabble; it's my favorite out of the bunch. Drawings on foggy glass tend to be aimless, whatever-your-mind-wanders-to sorts of images, and that Edward is present for Winry even then was very nice. Good work! It's fun to see how you improve as these chapters go along. |
just another fma fan chapter 2 . 7/30/2008 Okay, I've got comments for each story this time. They are so beautiful and sad. I love them all. 1)Meaningless: This sounds like something Winry would be thinking in vol 12 when she finally admitts she loves him. It fits nicely. I'm bad at angst, so I admire your writing. 2)Goodnight: It was short and touching really. And your stories were hilarious. I got my dad hooked on it and we watched the whole thing one a week (I recorded it from Adult Swim. heh heh...) My mom walked in during ep 25 at Hughes' funeral when Elicia was crying about them burying her papa. I think that freaked her out... 3)So Far Away: sounds like an after the movie scene. That's why I like the manga better, there's a CHANCE of them being together at least! If you want a nice alternative to the movie, try Winter in Germany on this sight. It's amazing! And honestly, it makes a lot more sense to me that the real CoS plot. -_-' 4)Summer Haze: I love ghost stories! xD touching and sad. Nice writing. 5)Sunday's Fog: I don't see Winry as the artistic type, but it was a nice touch. Also, I took first year Japanese last year, and I can say that it's not as hard as you might think. I'm glad you had with the translator. By the way, do you know what "Sasuke" means in Japanese? Because I could never figure it out! (Although "Neji" means "screw" *the object...sick minds...*) 6)While I Wait: I think this is my favorite. I have always had a soft spot for poems. *wistful smile* not if only I could write one... Anyway, um... I loved it. ;; And the chibi after party was brilliant wasn't it? Soo cute! And the black hayates attacking was the BEST! xDD Done now. ;; |
DemonRaily chapter 6 . 5/18/2008 Yey, thanks for updating _ |
Whyle chapter 6 . 5/17/2008 Hey ! It's me again ! XD ! I'll never forget a fic that i like ! ;)! (forgive me if my English is bad .. T_T) So, such a wonderful chapter, I love it ! ;) ! It's very well-written ! Thanks a lot ! ;) ! And, update as soon as you can ! XD ! |
Whyle chapter 5 . 5/17/2008 THAT'S SO CUTE ! XD ! ;) ! But, update quicker please ! XD ! thank you very much ! |
DemonRaily chapter 5 . 5/16/2008 _ _ _ _ _ |
Aiiro Hoshi chapter 4 . 4/5/2008 So in Summer Haze...is Ed dead? D: But you've got some pretty interesting ideas here for these - although this hasn't been updated for a while, maybe you could post a few more? -grin- Aiiro Hoshi |
Evil Little Dog chapter 4 . 12/28/2007 Poor Winry. I'm confused, though; is she having a dream or a hallucination in the very end? I almost wondered if perhaps she died and hadn't realized it until Ed disappeared. |
Whyle chapter 4 . 12/23/2007 TT ... poor Winry, life is not fair ! great chapter ! thanks ! ;) |
Inuchemist10 chapter 2 . 12/22/2007 I that it was great, but I really liked your comment about your dad, parents are hysterical aren't they? I'm twenty five and my mother thinks I nuts cos, I into FMA so much, but she does like my art... |
Whyle chapter 3 . 12/21/2007 nice chapter ! you're gonna update every day ? cool ! lol ! thank you ! ;) |
Whyle chapter 2 . 12/20/2007 lol ! If he had seen Envy ... XD ! update soon, thanks a lot ! ;) (nice chapter anyway) |
AdventureAddict chapter 1 . 12/19/2007 -whimpers- Winry, gimme a hug! It was sweet. Short, but sweet. I liked how it was accurate to Winry's personality. |
Whyle chapter 1 . 12/19/2007 so cute ! continue like that, I love your fic ! thanks, and update soon ! |