I liked it. Honestly it felt like I was watching and episode form the anime. Quietknight you have done a great job.
my one complaint is that just like the anime and manga your sad when it is over so soon.
:) Terry

i say negi got some nice preasents for the girls

This is really nice. It's got that Christmas feel to it.

aw! so kawaii! I love negi's gift to nodoka!

and nodoka's gift to negi gave me a quick boom on the nose! YEAH!

Very simple. Good job.

It was a nice story, but some of he dialogue is kind of robotic. In a more casual tone, use the word's 'let's' or 'he's' or anything like 'can't' or 'won't', because it's not an essay or a business letter. Merry Christmas, Happy Hannukah, and Happy Kwanza!