i can't wait to see what happens next. update soon :D

awsome story yo! Will T end up falling for Orton? That would be cool! lol

uh oh! Randy is definitely in deep trouble with Talia now lol!

I was going through the reviews I had for some of my own fics and decided to return the reviewing favour.

Hm... I like the initial idea you've got here so far but just a couple of suggestions if I may. I'm certainly not trying to rip shreds off you here, just some constructive advice.

When you have a conversation going, remember to start a new line for each person that speaks, it makes them easier to follow and doesn't leave you with hulking unbroken paragraphs.

The events seemed a little rushed and explanations for things a little to brief. Also is the woman one and the same? At the start you mention a girl with multi-coloured hair and at the end there's a 'mostly brunette' woman. Are they one and the same or were there two women starting on the show?

You also seem to be a victim of what I'm trying to break myself out of as well, punctuation between speech and sentences. I didn't even know I wasn't doing it until my beta pointed it out to me one day.

Apart from that your doing well so far. I'm fairly easy to get a hold of if you want a bit of help or simply want to bounce ideas off of.

Aussie luv!

Interesting. Hope to read more soon.

Jen