love the story tho id love to see you update soon

excellent story. i would really like for you to continue with this story. i hope you change your mind.

i like it and definately think that you should continue

i could dopt if you want.

well it actualy is good but maybe if you made your chapters a little longer you would get more reviews.

i'm willing 2 adopt the story if u aren't going 2 finish it...I really liked it think i shuold be able 2 continue it. if i do would u mind if i changed some things in the begging? anyway plzz let me know it would be my secound fan fic my first i am probubly going 2 re-write but with this story i already have some i really loved your story.

I agree with Tiger-Cub ur story is AWESOME! dont give up on it just because u dont have alot of reveiws.

not to like critize or anything, but you're seriously going to give up just beacuse of lack of reviews? dude, you have 12 for 4 chapters. thats pretty good. you shouldn't get disheartened just because you don't have billions of reviews. most authors don't get that kind of response. Unless you yourself are just not enjoying writing the story, i don't think you should give up. and besides, i like this story. :D

just because most people out there read without reviwing isn't reason enough to give up.

my advice would be to look at the Hit counter. people may be too lazy or forgetful to review, but each number there tells you that your story is being read.

but in the end, it is really up to you. Personlly i don't think holding your story hostage is really going to do anything. But do as you will.

Just because a few people said a few bad things doesnt mean you should stop mate. If you want to keep going then go for it! Its like if you fell off a bike you just keep trying untill you get it! Not everyone has to like it, you just have to like it mate! The story is smashing!

Briliant! I love it!

omg, i absolutly

the parrot is that guy without a tongue's parrot...Jack is coming right? the black pearl is? update soon?

UPDATE!

ooh, sorry i didn't review this one earlier...

anyway, i like this prolouge. It's really interesting. Just to clarify, is Bella a vampire or still human? not that i guess it really matters, since they end up undead anyway, but still, just wondering.

Anyway, this is really great. please write more, cos i really enjoy this story ;D

happy band-ing! lol

coolness, this is great. i like how Bella and Elizabeth are related, and i like how Edward has changed. I reckon he would be even more attractive with green eyes. lol.

I dunno, but i think it might be better if the chatpers were longer, but you don't have to. The story's great as it is.

Also, what about Captin Jack Sparrow? does the parrot mean he's comming? that parrot thing has me dumbfounded.

Looking forward to the next update...

Kudos so far ;D

awesome. i like this so far. you've got a nice momentem. so, please update soon! i'll be waiting. lol. ;D