I have no flames to give you and who could?! This fanfic sounded totally like Dally thank you soo much for posting it!

This was perfect. You got Dally's character perfectly, and the whole thing was just perfect. Was this an assignment in school? My teacher in 8th grade gave us pretty much this as a prompt. You know, the whole 'describe Dally and Johnny's relationship from a first person POV.' thing. Anyway, as I said before this was just perfect. Keep writing.

Awesome writing! It's very structured and sound, really nice job. Keep it up! XD

Horrible! that was not horrible! That was so perfect it was like reading Dallas's exsact thoughts! You got his character so perfectly I loved it! You shouldn't be so hard on yorself! Horrible... Ha!

Horrible? Are you kidding? This is PERFECT!

Good! :)

I like the idea behind this, but the way you wrote as Dally and used a lot of unrealistic phrases and words took me away from the story- I ended up concentrating more on just HOW unrealistic some of the stuff was.

That was not horrible. it was great!

I don't think this is bad at all. It, to me at least, sounded like it came from Dally himself! _ Good job. Why not do one of these in Johnny's POV?

...Horrible? You seriously think that was horrible? That was fantastic! Dallas was nothing more than perfectly in character, and I loved how you had Dallas keep saying how much he hates Johnny, but at the end of it all, he just starts talking about how much he loves him. It was nothing more than perfect. And that's why it's going into my favorites list.

This was... wow, this was so amazing! You captured Dally's attitude and vocabullary better than any other person I've seen attempt to write him! Are you gonna make a sequel with Johnny's thoughts of Dally? I'd like to see it if you're up to it!

Anyways, I still love it!

-LfJp

nice little one shot. very well written! you caught dallys voice very good...

That was amazing! I absolutely loved it. You are great at describing Dally's emotions and how he feel's about Johnny. Great story.

I loved it! It was so... Dally-like, and I love how he's irritated with Johnny through most of the fic, but he does admit to actually loving him, but it seems like it could be taken either as friendship or slash.

Wonderfully written... I enjoyed reading it so much you should really do some more Outsider fanfics. You're a good writer and you captured Dallas' character very well.

Haha, woah!

I thought it was brilliant.

I believe Dallas was very much in character, really.

The way you write Dally is the way Hinton does.

Ya' know, it was cute, too!

I thought of it as friendship and I really enjoyed it.

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Loved it!

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