| Reviews for Alphonse Elric and the Red Tattoo |
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Soap234 chapter 1 . 6/3/2018 This is one of the most original stories I have ever seen! I love it! Pls keep writing! |
blissful8brownies chapter 1 . 11/30/2011 i love the idea for this story. whats going to happen? but diddn't you say that Ed was Al's great uncle |
FoxInBox aka FIB chapter 1 . 8/15/2010 Oh my gosh! This story is beyond excelent! I noticed that you havn't written anymore to it in quite some time, and I was curious...why? It is so good! I really really hope that you will find the sudden urge and inspiration to write some more! I'm truly excited and curiouus to find out what will come next! So please please PLEASE write more sometime soon! :D Until the next time (which I hope comes soon)! ~FIB~ |
TillyMe chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 Woah! Next generation Elrics and Potters? Jackpot:) |
Kitty-Kat Allie chapter 1 . 10/10/2009 For a completely random crossover that I only found cuz I GOOGLED Alphonse Elric fanfiction (lol, ennui at work) this is actually really cute! Too bad it doesn't look like you'll be finishing it as this was published two years ago. *sigh* Enjoyable though |
TurtleNoise chapter 1 . 6/18/2009 I really liked it. I was a little confused at first, but this was really awesome. Update soon please! |
blindhobos chapter 1 . 6/7/2009 Oh, I really like this! Please update! |
pikajay chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 I must say, this is an excellent start to a new and original story, I applaud to you. I like the interaction between the two Als as it shows their innocence and naviety towards what would happen later on. A few little things I thought I'd point out is that whenever you use italics the word afterwards would join with that word, and when Albus introduced himself, he said "Mine name's Al", instead of "My name's Al". Anyways, I hope you update soon and I'll be putting this story into my C2 community. Keep up the good work! |
PurpleKiwi chapter 1 . 5/1/2008 Nice story so far! I really like the idea of sending one of Ed and Al's descendants to Hogwarts instead of Ed and Al themselves. Looking forward to more soon! _ |
agent000 chapter 1 . 4/30/2008 Lol, it took me so long to actually get around to reading this, but now that I have, I want to read more! LOL! It's cute, and it's one of the only good FMA/HP crossovers on the entire site. ;) Really well depicted. It makes total sense that the grandson of Alphonse Elric would be magical and go to Hogwarts, but he doesn't understand the fame of his grandfather and uncle very well. That's pretty well thought out, lol. If you get more inspiration for this, definitely write it up. It'd be awesome to read more, lol. |
Deception Alchemist chapter 1 . 3/21/2008 update soon! i totally love this chapter, and i can't wait to see the next one! |
Flair-of-fire chapter 1 . 3/5/2008 Aw I wanted to write a story with Harry and Ginny's kids the same age as Al and Ed .:pouts:. oh well, I'll still do it! Alphonse Mustang Elric X3 cute! |
Katty008 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008 Yay! I'm writing my own crossover with the second generation at the moment. Aren't they so fun to play with? |
DeletedAnon chapter 1 . 2/27/2008 Although some parts in the story doesn't match up (ex. Al's from a 'muggle family' he says, but Edward already knows about which attributes a house is affiliated with, etc.), it's an interesting concept. Keep going! |
Wednesday1990 chapter 1 . 2/20/2008 I love the theory that you have going, but 'Uncle" Edward almost sounds too much ike the real Edward. Is he the real Edward? Anyway I think that this story has a lot of potential and everybody would probably like to see an add on to the Harry Potter series for his kids. Good luck! |