wow this was great. i am speechless.

-—Janae

This watchmaker is mad, not blind . . .

I liked this

Interesting take on the God being a watchmaker part.

Wow. I really like this. I love seeing new views on Sylar. He's my favorite. Great job!

As always, you never cease to amaze me with your prose. Interesting concepts and ideology. I especially liked the mention of Frankenstein's monster as flesh or robot in reflection of time and technology; very neat comparison. Keep up the excellent writing hun!

Punchy, I love it! I've always been jealous of people who can write so little and still make it powerful. I can literally see Sylar saying all this, with that sexy, villainous smirk on his face. Great idea, too. I love the sense that the time in the watch shop was just the beginning, sort of like a training for him, and now he's going to move on to something bigger...

Props to you!

This is certainly the best fic about the cracks in deist philosophy that I have ever read...and bad philosophy, like bad company, corrupts good morals. Assuming Sylar ever had any. And then he takes a small step and casts himself as a watchmaker god...

Very interesting piece.

Any good watchmaker would do it right the first time.

This is so well written. That line was killer!

Are we just modeling technology after ourselves?

This line made me really think. Kudos.

I could fix the watches perfectly. Perfectly. I just knew.

And this! This was SO SYLAR! I could match this line to his face without hesitation.

It all works flawlessly in my mind. I am a watchmaker by trade, and I have done my observing. I think it’s time for a new phase. People are just so fascinating, and I have a long road to perfection in mind. Time to stop and smell the flowers, time to fix the unfit. Time to move on to my new clockwork toys.

Same with this little paragraph! Again, pure Sylar!

I'm sorry I just randomly picked out little pieces, haha. They were so good, and my absolute favorites. This piece was absolutely fantastic. I have never read such a great piece on Sylar, and with the entire focus on the watches and clocks and time...it was beautiful. A marvelous piece that you should be very proud of. You captured the essence of Sylar. To me, this piece gives him a sort of innocent desire. It's a very abstract and unique take on him. Flawless.

I'm speechless now.