Muy genial b

This was some good shit... keep it up

Holy crap. This has to be in the top 10 of my "Readable but FUBARed" stories list. I mean, it's not bad, but it's BAD, as in several hours of therapy bad. I'm gonna have to take a pause before reading the next chapter.

Try not to take this review negatively. I'm just a bit shocked.

This is an extremely interesting story! I like what you did with the characters and the Naruko character. It sounds like she has a bit of an incest issue, but that's not really a problem. This is fanfiction, yours specifically, and you have the right to write this however you want. Good luck and Godspeed.

~JAYSEN

DUDE! this is only 2 chapters and I feel like I've been reading it for hours! holy crap!, please update soon!

GOD DAMN! This is some seriously dark stuff! Where to start, the Inuzuka clan is messed up dude, but Tsume still is hot. The Uchiha and the Hyuga are as screwed as ever, except Hinata, she still seems cool (but a bit...off). This Konoha makes Sin City look like Green Acres.

On a brighter note, at least Naruto was still a relatively good person, willing to do anything to protect his sister.

holy shit this is TWISTED. at the same time it's freaking AMAZING. the idea of the inuzuka clan and their...ways, the whole concept of the messed up naruko...everything is so well planned and written. it's a shame that you've stopped writing...

u know this could hav easily been an incest(narutoxnaruko) if he was alive. even now she IS a demon it wouldn't be that hard 2 think up some way 2 revive him. but ya as much as i hate rape fics this is disturbingly(its a word now) addictive so i'll be looking forward 2 the next 1.

ja ne bitches

So... Is Naruto going to stay dead or will he be brought back in some form? This story intrigues me alot. What of non-Konoha characters, how much will we see of them?

Well fuck me up and serve me a milkshake, that was awesome beyond words. I initially thought you were replacing Naruto with Naruko, as in like,male Naruto never existed. That probably doesn't make any sense: well tough shit. Great premise, and as promised, DARK. I commend you. Keep goin' strong MountainWind

Ah, so that’s what happened to Naruto. The love for one’s own sibling can be as powerful as it is destructive, especially when in connection with the Kyuubi. Keep up the good work, dark

Interesting. I like some of the changes to the Naruto world, and hate others, but my final opinion has yet to be decided.

Nice idea about Naruto's sister, I always did like the crazy/evil/twisted versions of Naruto. As my favorite character, he (or Naruko) can do no wrong in my book. _

Kiba. Eww. Dx I now have much more hate for him and his clan then I already did. I hope Naruko personally guts him and his family. _

I'm still confused at the precedings and intended direction of this story, but I'll just wait and hope you update often enough to clear these things up. Good luck on your stories! :)

~KF~ out!

Ah I love this fic, it's just so out there that i have to stay with it till the end. Certainlly something that is not your norm Mountain.

Hmm this was long but good nonetheless. It explained alot which was good so there were things that confused me. The actions that took place in the attempted rape scene. How the hell, is Kiba born before Hana if he is younger than her? Also, what you mean Itachi killed the clan with a partner. During that time, he wasn't partnered with anyone nor was he in the Akatsuki organization. Other than that, it's pretty good. Oh and good to see you haven't given up on the story and what the deal with entwined tails.

Well, this is pretty messed up. By which I mean super awesome, because I love things which are messed up.

More please!