Can u pls do a sequel with May's family
This was so awesome

Omg burn from family!

May, I don't think succumbing to your hormones is always the best solution.

Awese story! So cute!

Haha! I love this story!

That's cute but why do parents have to bud in all the friggin time it's annoying but that's how they are, you gotta love 'em considering that your stuck with them

Oh this is so adorable! It's just... SQUEEE

Yeah, being a bit OOC is fine. Besides cases like May's, most everybody has a slightly different interpretation of each character anyway. So, unless you're the author, it's a bit "OOC".

Awesome!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was ADORABLE! :D

I love it! X3 It's just too cute!

I liked this one-very cute. Pretty believable overall, but could use a little work in some places. That is just my opinion. However, you do have a real talent for writing stories, and I am hoping to see more of your work.

I LOVED IT!

lol
good story

Ok so I know it's the middle of summer and this is a Christmas fic, but it was so good! Now it's kinda got me in the holiday mood! Lol I think I will go and look up some Christmas carols after this! _ lol but really this was really cute! Oh and the perverted joke when they first got to the mall,... Well,... I didn't get it / Lol but that is just me! I am kinda sheltered and naive (sp?) lol That's what I get for being a small town girl who still watches kid movies lol! And I'm proud! So anyways, good job keep it up! - GGU

Personally I don't agree that May's obnoxious and whiny... Ok maybe a little whiny. But not obnoxious. Then again it's been a long time since the Hoenn saga so maybe my memory's a bit off. Nice job on the story, it's really cute.