This was interesting. A really good OC. A shame it wasn't finished.

Awesome.

I enjoy her competence and their training.

I like the concept.

...i really like this fic. Its sad that you haven't updated since '08. I would really appreciate more chapters. Please. 3

This is really good and well written. Please write more.

Your story certainly has a lot of heart but into it. I can almost feel the emotion coming out of it. Not bad at all. I really like your OC though, seems kind of hard but human sort of, real nice to see some good writing. Hope she wins!
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An interesting what if story, however if team 7 gets to proficient the story may get boring.

You will need to be careful and balance things out.

Sadly the story looks to be dead, if you ever update people will be waiting to pick it backup.

I look forward to more :)

It would be nice if you could continue this fis now - as you finished Fate (Great fic BTW, I read it one more time).

It is certainly as good as S'TarKan's "Team 8" if not better in some aspects (unfortunately not as long ;) ), you certainly made it more realistic with that nice kill in chapter 3.

PS.

Could you add more summary? I had some problems with finding it again when I forgot who wrote it. And laconic description made it MUCH harder to find.

*poke* *poke*

aw.

Soo umm... more of this now that you're done with Fate?

Pleez?

*inserts picture of large eyed kitten*

This is really good and a great change of pace from the usual Naruto fics. I hate to see that it has not been updated in such a long time and I hope that the story has not been abandoned. I am going to put it on my alerts and hope for the best.

Still as interesting as ever. I cannot wait to see the fight between Lin and Zabuza.

C.D.

This is way better then them having Kakashi for a sensei. I have to applaude you for writing this.

C.D.

Love it. Better than the ones where Kakshi has them and trains them better then in the series. Sometimes reading stuff like that gets abit boring at times. Even if there's a slight change to it like replacing one team member or putting Naruto on a different team with a different sensei.

C.D.