This, and The Apology, that follows it, are two of my very favorite stories. I think you got everyone's character, behavior and their speech patterns down wonderfully. You and Ficwriterjet are two of the best at this, in my opinion.
Of course, the spankfic are just a fantasy. No way would anyone spank a federal agent, no matter how naughty they were. However, in this one, I could almost visualize Gibbs being frightened, then furiously angry at the irresponsible behavior of a young man he thinks of as his child. I could imagine him going all paternal and handling it the way a father would with two feuding teenage boys who did something so stupid and dangerous. I did think the head slap Tim got was undeserved.
I liked that Tim wouldn't forgive Tony so easily and his shock at learning of Tony's punishment at Dad's hands in the followup story, The Apology. I hope you start writing again. You're really good.

great story

Strewth! A snake. The man really needs to take a step back occasinally and think about what he's doing

Just found this story. What a good one.

very good job

Poor Tony. The boy just doesn't think before acting.

The way you wrote it, I really felt for Tony in this one. A switching especially from Gibbs would be the worst!

Nice ending, too.

it was a good chapter thanks

aww sweet ending. lol the iguana incident the mind boggles!

ok it wouldnt let me review remembrance so here it is for both. thanks for writing remembrance. Veterans day means alot to me even as an american. My Grandfather fought in WWII and my sons Grandfather was a paratrooper in vietnam. My sons father is in the army and i have two cousins in the services and my best friends boyfriend is an airman. Vets day means alot and i always buy the fake poppys to support the troops. only because i can never find real ones anywhere.

As for this one shorter review but still good. I like the story. Love Gibbs as a father figure. Thanks again.

ouch. painful. a switch. somehow i doubt it will be the last time tony needs to be punished! you really write well and get into the characters' heads well.

Nice story. I can see Tony thinking he was playing a harmless prank, and then feeling completely guilty after realizing it wasn't harmless. I loved that Gibbs knew how Tony would feel and took care of it for him.

Ello luv! I think your stories are brilliant. You've got the characters down perfectly. I'm fond of discipline fics, and when I first read your stories, I had never seen NCIS. Needless to say, I've now watched all the episodes and become a fan of the show, so thanks! You've also inspired me to write my own NCIS fic. I've written a few other spanking fics in other fandoms, but I deleted my ff account a few years back. As soon as my new account isn't on hold, I'll be posting my new NCIS story. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Cheers,

Brooke

best story! I love Gibbs' strict-love for Tony.

please some more stories..

I loved this story, and the sequel as well...Great imagery with the woodshed and you hit McGee perfect witht he whole literal/figurative speech. I have now read both of them several times!

that was wonderfully written i can totaly see that happaning

the disriptions of the act was perfect im very impressed i dont read many fictions where they get spanking right

i would love to read more along these lines may be with abby on the reciving end or david.