I just want to say that i hold this story near and dear to my heart. This is my 3rd read through, and i've had this story save for years, often coming back to it at random points in time when it pops into my head, haha! Now, time to read the sequel again :)

I know I already said this, but changing the names and self publishing is a FANTASTIC idea. You have 211k words in this story, that’s almost as big as Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. You have 500-600 novel pages here. And self publishing is apparently really easy, you can utilize different websites and sell on amazon! You should look into itSigned, a new lifelong fan

I’m not sure how active you are anymore, or if you’ll even see this, but wow. It’s been a long time since I’ve read something that I not only couldn’t put down, but made me feel some kind of way. I didn’t know what to expect getting into this story, but it exceeded any and all expectations. A few chapters in, I actually forgot it was a fanfiction and it just became a very human novel. (I’m serious, you should revise it, change the names and self publish this as a separate novel. Please. I will purchase it.) It was almost scary how much this story resonated with me, and there were times it made me rehash my own past. The refreshing thing though, was even though you touched on these dark, gritty topics like rape, drug use, verbal and physical abuse, suicide and self harm, you in no way glorified it. These are tough subjects to approach in a way that isn’t triggering, and you nailed it. It was a story about healing. It was a story that made me want to heal. To stop being stagnant and ask for help when I need it.

Seriously though. It resonated in a scary way. Even the Portuguese resonated with me! My dad grew up in Brasil and he would always sing the Portuguese happy birthday. I agree with Axel— it’s much prettier than the American version!

Anyway, I just wanted to say thank you. This story is going to stay with me for a very, very long time.

You know what, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY, AMAZING AND FANTASTIC STORY I EVER READ! The slow pace romance, the plot, the development-and so on are so great that I cannot put this story down no matter what. I freaking love it so much you know! I'm not gonna lie-Roxas and I really do have similarities, not the past but the depression and suicide attempts for several years. It took a huge effort to move forward and just like Roxas, I found someone to help me at long last. That's why I could understand Roxas feeling the entire story. Anyways, thank you so much for creating this story, I was entirely shock when I read the time about the reincarnation... didn't expected for KH2 scene to popped in this story. You're aweseom author!

Yay! Omg, so I’ve been reading this fic for well over 2 months nowFINALLY! A kiss. Lol

This is an amazingly well written story. I really like it. The character development is great. Axel is a sexy beast per ush. I understand why it took so many chapters to get here with all of Rox’s trauma. I just get impatient. I’m excited to see how it ends

Mmmmm you write so well. I love your one liner scene endings 3

Hey hey hey! Wow, a well written Kh fic I haven’t read! :D OMG, Lol. I love love loved this chapter! It was long, well written, and had great content! :D I’m honestly super stoked that it’s so longI know I’m gonna love reading this fic over the next week or so. 3
Off to chapter 2!

I wonder if you still check your comments? I read this story like.. 6 years ago? When I was about 13 or 14 and I put it in my favorites way back then. Now I’m 21, and this year has been rough so I figured I’d rummage through my old favorites and try to immerse myself in fan fiction again. This is the first story I came back to! I didn’t remember anything when I first opened it but as the story went on, I got a nostalgic feeling of barely recognizing the story and experiencing it anew as a grown adult now. I love your story! It feels incredibly real, and the characters feel like plausible people. Not to mention, roxas’s mental illness is shown perfectly where he’s not like a helpless baby because of it, he’s still his own person just tied down and I know all too well that feeling. I hope your life is going wonderfully since you wrote this over 10 years ago, and thanks again for influencing me as a child about what true friends are like.

I loved reading this story. I'm not usually too keen on stories that deal with suicide, but I actually liked this one a lot. It was written really well and, of course, I love Axel and Roxas lol thanks for writing this story!

...wasn't there more to the sex scene...? I could have sworn it was way more detailed when I read this before...maybe I'm just remembering it differently but I am so dissapointed at how cut and short it was...I wait the whole story and they have sex for like two paragraphs...*cries* guess I just gotta go read some smut lol...love this story still just so confused and let down.

I'm reading this again for like the tenth time...whenever I think of my favorite fanfic (or even just fave story) I think of Inertia Creeps :) I hold this story very near to my heart and am always excited to read it again. I know it's been years since you wrote this but I want to thank you again for writing such a masterpiece that is so cherishable! You are an amazing person and if I knew you in real life I would give you unlimited hugs! Heheh...love you and intertia creeps

Hey-ya! Great story. I mean, took me a week to get through with school and everything so long ass story, but good. I applaud the plot. The story already got where I thought it was going in like the first 6 chapters, so it was really cool to not know where a sorry was going for a change.

This was an incredible story. I get so much in site and thinking done when I read this book. It just blows my mind what I good writer can do to the reader. It is honestly one of my favorite stories to read on here.

Woaahh! I can't tolarate Axel's character! He is so damn hot and funny and sweet!:D

I like the story very much and I think the personalities are spot on! :)

So, I started this story yesterday, and got all the way up to chapter 19. I had wanted to keep going, but of course, being as how I could hardly keep my eyes open, I just had to put it down in favor of some sleep.

Today, however, I can happily say that I have finished this incredible story. It is so very hard to find good stories, be it on here or on Wattpad or some other place, and to find one as good as this has really just made this weekend a blast.

You did an amazing job with this story, and I am seriously about to look to see what else you have written because I can't get enough. You made me feel deeply connected to Roxas in a way that I can hardly explain. I won't lie, I am dealing with issues of my own in my own life, not at all like Roxas experienced, but enough to where I know how hard it is to really get out and appreciate the world for what it is. I was so deeply moved by how he, with the help of lovable Axel, was able to fix himself up and get on with his life. I know it's unrealistic to say that he was perfectly fine at the end of the story, as I doubt anyone would ever be again after having gone through that, but I am happy that he at least got to a point where he can appreciate each and every day of his life with someone he truly loves.

You are an incredible author, and you wrote such a touching and moving story that I'm just at a loss of words (which is a total lie, I feel, as I've been rambling words out this entire review).

I can't wait to see what other incredible stories you decide to create for us and wish to thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading such a beautiful story.

-Hope Zidel