Oh, intriguing! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm terribly confused, but I think that was the point, so good job! :D I love a good mystery.

Oh, this was good. I've been wanting to see a story about that time, right after his brain is removed. And this one did it so well. I want more, though, you have to understand. You've got 15 years or so to write now. ;-)

I really like this. It really feels like that's the way Glitch would think. _ Great job.