Reviews for Knocked Up
reallyseaweed chapter 18 . 5/22
The end. I like it though
Guest chapter 10 . 1/3/2019
Wait you can have sex pass six months of your pregnancy. In fact doctors encouraged you to have sex if your pass your due date. I know that it's six weeks after you give birth that you shouldn't have sex.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/3/2019
OMG LMAO "Draco I'm a good cock." I had a good laugh on that. Your grammar is awful, but English is your second language so I gave you a pass. The spelling isn't wrong it's just it's the wrong word in the wrong meaning. Like living and leaving are two different words. Your characters are so immature. These are two people they had to grow up rather quickly because of the war they fought in. They are really OOC. I want to agree with the other reviewers this story is just unreadable I wish you had a beta.
Ditte3 chapter 12 . 3/25/2018
Lovely chapter. :)
Ditte3 chapter 11 . 3/25/2018
Such a lovely heart warming chapter.
Ditte3 chapter 6 . 3/25/2018
Sara. ...that evil b...Draco should leave her. I want our two lovebirds to make up.
malugargula chapter 18 . 6/17/2017
Amazing fic
Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2016
I tried... I really tried to ignore the grammar / spelling but I just can't any more! I'm sure your story had a good plot. You should get a beta so people can actually ready your story
aperson chapter 3 . 4/23/2015
Sorry...this story turned out to be unreadable after 3 chapters..
Elased chapter 7 . 2/27/2015
What part of this is the movie Knocked up? I actually liked the movie but the execution of this fic is disappointing. Draco dated another girl after he knocked Hermione up, and proceeded to cheat on that girl with Hermione? And Hermione just .. what, pined after him? I wished you didn't include you based the story on the film, I wouldn't have expected much otherwise.
IWillGoWithYouHarry chapter 19 . 3/1/2014
Amazing story! Good job :)

Although, I can still see some mistakes. Get a beta if you don't and get this story corrected perfectly.

The more perfect, better it is.
tffan1980 chapter 18 . 6/30/2012
IT WAS A GREAT STORY BUT SORRY TO SAY HE GRAMMER AND SPELLING SUCKED
JaneA0202 chapter 19 . 10/27/2011
I reread this story and I still like it.
CheshireCat23 chapter 17 . 5/28/2011
Was Hermione oart of Harry's and Ginny's wedding? I don't think you mentioned them being married before? Kinda comes very surprising, I thought they were just dating.

Yeah, well Aurora did her job, even if she was angry.
CheshireCat23 chapter 16 . 5/28/2011
She wants Ginny as a bridesmaid/maid of honor? Stacy I understand, seeing how she is Hermione's best friend, but why Ginny? I mean yes, they are friends, but they hadn't been in contact for years. They only started to be buddy-buddy again weeks ago, not only even a month. I would't ask a childhood friend, whom I USED to be close with to be my bridesmaid, but rather a friend that I'm close to at the present time.

And why would she think she could chose Draco's best man/men? Brides never chose the grooms best man. Hermione is not stupid.

Well, even if she's marrying an old man, at least he's handsome, ahahahah. I quote: "... a very handsome old man". Hahahaha.

But pinching a baby? She's so evil.
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