I completely agree, a sequel is needed! I LOOOOOVE this story! Really good!

That was very well written,good job.

Chihiro and Haku are so cute together and your character interpretation of them is really good

~Lychee

Good story, I really liked it!

Very sweet. One thing bothered me though, to many parenthesis, you could have left those out.

Example (A/N: I'm using the park I live close to as a reference to how the park looks like. And no, the park doesn't have a river in it. It has a pond.) Unnecessary. The reader does not need to know you are describing a park you know of and placing this A/N in the story distracts the reader from the story making it harder to get into. If you wish to acknowledge a place you know of place this A/N before or after the story.

(A/N: they only parked a few feet away from the entrance.) This sentence does not need to be and authors note.

They only parked a few feet away from the entrance. Would work and it doesn't have to be in the story at all if you don't want it to be.

(A/N: Haku's wearing the same clothes he was wearing in the movie. I'm too lazy to describe them.) Again this is distracting, if you don't want to describe his clothing don't mention his clothing at all. People who have seen the movie will automatically picture him in those clothes.

That was the only thing I noticed wrong. In the future avoid putting author's notes in the story and if you must note something important do so before or after the story. Other than that it was a very nice story.

It was pretty good, you should do that sequel that u were talking about.