Reviews for Delirium
Origin Unknown chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
This was really great! The title and summary gave way to suspicion of future events, so reading the happy memory built up tension of what would happen. The topic of mental health was interesting to bring as a twist in the story, too. Good job! I enjoy your work!
qwAEUI chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
This made me cry. Very well written!
the-original-lovelace chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
it was all happy and then it was very abruptly horribly depressing.

LOVE IT!

an epic twist indeed, my friend
eyepatchesandpipes chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
The ending twist was just... wow. Brilliant, loved it.
Tyrsan chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
AGAIN WITH THE DEATH! WHY? WHY? Why! Why? ... why?
welmel chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
so happy for them in the beginning, yet felt so sad for them in the end.

nice work:)
Halleyster chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
It's very good, not really so sad in my opinion -I like Angst- but I liked it very much indeed! Please write more, to explain what actually happened...
Mione of Ravenclaw II chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Good story,but sad at the end. I definitely did not see that coming!

I think that it would be interesting if you wrote another story describing what exactly happened and how everything transpired leading up to and after the final scene of this one shot.
beloved-raven chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
so sad... i almost cied... :{ good but extremly sad story
fotcdelacour chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
No! How could you do that to them? Lol. Twas great. I prefer the happy ones but this was really good regardless. Hope you get bored at work more often p.
DeMoKa chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I WAS about to say sweet and touchingly family fic... THEN you had that boom of reality... *cries*

*is feeling awfully down on account of her OTP being abused* poor things, but yes, this was well written with a very emotional end!
Courtlynn D chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Oh wow. That was an incredible piece of work. I give you a million points for that! I was totally blindsided from that! Bravo ThreeDollarBill!

-Courtney Dax
Zooks chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
That was more upsetting than I expected but, I have to say, well written. You emotionally draw us in for the sucker-punch :P But really, it was perfectly balanced, I think.

Good stuff, I like your writing.
Dr. J's silent pet chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
I hate you!

Actually I don't, sorry T_T

it's just that... it was all so pink and then... it was black.

it made me a little sad

It is really sad. She lives in her own world and her friends are suffering from the sight. And they can't ignore it or walk away without feeling guilt or pity.

And worst of all It's x-mas...

It reminds me of something that happened in my family...

Bye
LuisaHUAH chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
...it's...so...sad...

i'm gonna start to cry now
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