Reviews for Team 8 in Hogwarts
silverbyakugan chapter 13 . 6/14/2014
As a suggestion, can you fix the grammar issues?
Hyuga-Hanyou-Lover chapter 25 . 2/9/2013
Sequel! Are you planning it?!
cherryblossom27a chapter 26 . 9/14/2012
Hey moon knight are you okay? Im really worried of you just quitting your account. Ive enjoyed the story so much that i didnt see this coming. Well I know its your decision but are you sure you want to do that to the people that respect you? Well I will end this review with this, have a good life mate. Hope ya come back
jaelin910 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
this prologue isn't making me want to read further.
another way you could record his head-height would be 5'6"
M chapter 14 . 7/29/2012
As an Inuzuka, Kiba's strength lies in teamwork. If you separate him from or threaten Akamaru than you've already won.
M chapter 16 . 1/27/2012
Aww, that's okay. I've been waiting for an excuse to violently disembowel you, Neji! XD
M chapter 6 . 1/27/2012
Kiba: Woof!

Hinata: *sweatdrops* Kiba, you aren't a dog...

Kiba: Shut the hell up! Don't tell me what the f*ck I am!

Hinata: *facepalms* I'm surrounded by IDIOTS.
M chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
Well, Hinata definitely belongs in Slytherin, while Kiba should be in Gryffindor. I think that Shino should be in Ravenclaw.

Shino: I like bugs.

Hinata: Yes, yes, we KNOW already!
Mon Esprit Libre chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
So far, you've been saying everything in past-tense like they're writing in diaries.

Sorry, but I give it a blah.
M chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
For a fun and insanely evil (I haven't COMPLETELY changed) plot twist, you should put Hinata in Slytherin, and Kiba and Shino in Gryffindor. And Kurenai-sensei can do whatever the hell she wants.
Zany257 chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
I thought Kiba didn't have a dad and Shino didn't have a mom. I also thought that when Kiba, Hinata, and Shino got out of the accadmy(cant spell) they were 12?
Aille chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
This looks to be a very interesting concept for a fic and from what I read it was enjoyable. However I had difficulty following it with the multiple changes in the POV's and repeating explanations. You have a really good concept here and I wish you luck.
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 26 . 7/7/2011
are you alright? there's nothing wrong right? of course you can just stop , but i hope it's not for a bad reason...

i'm worried.
kitsunesecret chapter 26 . 7/6/2011
I have only about one you delete your account does that mean this story will disappear forever? I remember enjoying this story a lot and I had been hoping a sequel would be made. I'm sad to hear that you're deleting your profile and I understand that it's your choice, but if it must happen can you make sure this story is adopted? Unfortunately my parents won't let me get a fanfiction profile so I can't adopt it myself. Now to end this review I would like to wish you good luck and happiness. Enjoy life, Moon Spirit!
Lauri3n chapter 25 . 5/15/2011
This is awesome!
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