Reviews for Atonement
shay chapter 6 . 7/25
why is hermione acting like a dolt? I understand gryffindor bravery, but she'd have to know that any interaction with a death eater would end like that
elle chapter 16 . 5/15
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I'M SO HAPPY I'M SO HAPPY THEY'RE ALL GONNA BE FINE! Will they ever get back to London? Did you choose the characters precisely to pair them off? Dean and Ginny. Once Ginny moves on. It's okay. It's going to be okay. She's. They have to move past the war. It's okay. The way Hermione and Draco are together. She won't be betraying anyone by moving on. That's just how life is now. You move forward with time. Luna and Neville. Seamus and Lavender. They can be truly happy now. They're safe. I hope they find peace within their souls. Hermione's right. What do they do now? They fought for so long. I wonder what they did that took them 4 months? Hmm hmm will there be an epilogue? AAAAA thank you so much for writing this 3
elle chapter 15 . 5/15
Does that mean everyone else not there is dead? Neville Dean Seamus. Lavender Ginny Luna Hermione. Huh. Parvati is dead. Ron and Harry. The rest of the Gryffindors in their year made it. Except Ron and Harry and Parvati. Well that's. That's fucked up. That's rather really cruel to me skdjhgskjsjk. :( I'm glad they all survived though. James... :( he's alive. I'm so glad.
elle chapter 14 . 5/15
:( the wand reacted to her. Shifted its allegiance to her and yet she let it go. It makes the goodbye final. The last piece of Ron is gone. Dead. He's really dead. And it's also sad. She considered Malfoy Manor her home. I wonder if the torture took place? I guess not since she's more on research than hunting. And she didn't ever bring that up even in her thoughts. Anyways. Draco's home. Burning to the ground. The elves... I hope they all fled for safety. :( it must be fucking painful to him. Despite all the things that went wrong in that house, it was home to him.
elle chapter 13 . 5/15
Well he is wrong for always reading her mind. Hermione is still mourning, maybe, alright I can give her that. But she can't always compare them. That's just not fair. It's understandable to miss her friends, all of them, even with special care for Harry and Ron but to always have to compare Draco and Ron? That's still wrong even if she's the only one aware of it. Maybe they should just stop for now. She obviously still needs time to heal. Has she even really mourned them all yet? Are they really all dead? Has she accepted that? She can't just buryy them in her head the way their bodies are now underground. You don't heal that way.
elle chapter 12 . 5/15
Well. Harry's dead so that's one more horcrux down. Since they were horcrux hunting, I assume the Gaunt ring is now gone thanks to Albus. The diary. The locket hopefully? Could they have accessed it? And. And. Now what. What are they gonna do now? Can he kill him off now? The world is in tatters. Even if Voldepants dies, the death eaters will just rerank. Ugh i hate them all. Nasty minded gits.
elle chapter 11 . 5/15
Ronald this is what he deserves. Not all the bashing dramione writers usually give him :((( oh my darling... i can't believe Draco helped find horcruxes. How many are left? Nagini's killed. Hmm. Mayhaps the hufflepuff cup? The ravenclaw diadem?
elle chapter 10 . 5/15
ATTAGIRL FIGHT HIM
elle chapter 9 . 5/15
What's he planning? Is this some last mission for the Order? Or just self serving shit? He's doing a shit job at redeeming himself to her
elle chapter 8 . 5/15
SIXTY EIGHT GALLEONS! OF BOOKS? ARE YOU STUDYING MEDICINE HERMIOEN SOSKSKDKDKDMD serves that Warrington right doe what's that nonverball spell? Hmm hmm those books in Draco's study has smth to do with Hermione being kept captive? Has she tried doing things? Poison. Escape. Suicide. Has she?
elle chapter 7 . 5/15
3 months. If by the time they were captured, Ginny's belly was already swollen then by now she should have given birth already. What's happening in tje outside world? The wizarding world will PERISH if they persecute all half bloods. There's only a sizeable number of purebloods left.
elle chapter 6 . 5/15
Well at least Zabini was behaving better than anyone. I'd like to think he's a friend. Lucius was also mentioned in past tense. Is he dead? Why is Narcissa dead?
elle chapter 5 . 5/15
Narcissa's dead. Dumbledore's Army can't all be dead cept for Hermione. Noooo. Ginny :( they can't have. Someone could have escaped again. What about the Order?
elle chapter 4 . 5/15
how in the world are there hundreds of elves there in the manor? KSDKFKF AND draco said his house. Lucius is? Where? He's lord now? Where's Narcissa?
elle chapter 3 . 5/15
so many galleons and he didn't even call her mudblood
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