good story

Can't read because you made Charlie an abuser. I bet you like that neglectful piece of crap Rene. To me she is the abuser but good luck with g h your story.

Can esme tell something is wrong?

I struggled too! Alternate Universe

why is she still overweighted when she is starving for weeks

okay I'm getting worked up because it won't let me read the twenty-two chapter

it's a cute story.
there were quite a few inconsistencies, ie. bella driving then walking then driving then walking when she didn't have a car or when she snuck up on the vampires to overhear them talking, etc etc...
there were parts to the story i disagreed with,
there were parts to the story i wished bella did things differently,
but,
overall, it was an entertaining story for the younger crowd.

Sorry I was to lazy to log in... anywho great chapter! I know I'm a little late but I don't care I loved your story!

Why does Bella have to be overweight. The story would be better if she was skinny. Less fat and meat so to speak. She would hurt more easily by abuse

Beautiful story very beautiful ending i could read it all over again actually i am too

xoxox- Mijon

Yes, Edward is right, he deserves it

Alice is great

Yea, he is a monster

I just recently started reading FanFics so im way late on reviewing but i still do. I adore this story it was well written, one of the best parts were the little song lyric clips at thr bottom of the chapters. They all fit so perfectly. Im getting ready to look up more of the author's post. Thanks for posting this one. The Author is truely talented.

Great story. Thanks for writing it