Love it! Absolutely love it! The ending when Serena was making him feel guilty for everything he said and made her feel was funny and great. That was both mischievous, mean but funny at the same time. And I absolutely loved it when Darien was reunited with his parents and Serena reunited with her mother from the past. The whole, them dying and going to the land of the good souls and meeting their parents really got to me. It was bittersweet because of them seeing their parents after so long then having them return to the land of the living and end up forgetting meeting their parents was just bittersweet. I hope you write more amazing stories like this.

Really loved the story

I assumed it was his mother, although the recent events I understand why she might think in another direction, she really needed to think that through after his death scene. Who else would he want to see again most in his life besides Serena? Great chapter.

This version of the story is so cute! I love it!

Loved reading this one. LOVED IT!

Awww, you are a very good writer. This story is very good, and I understand. Cause almost every single FanFiction story has some sort of happy ending. :)

painful ending... :(

AHH thank you so much for writing this!

Me agrado :)

I just finished reading your story and I simply wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your imagination, unlike many stories which I switch off from or find that after finishing them I've wasted precious hours of my life, I read yours from start to finish and from it very enjoyable.

I really really love this story, the concept of going into a different real after death is so perfect too. I love it when Darien turns into Prince Endymion again, he's so cool and handsome in his true form, and I love the fact that you allowed Prince Diamond to have a human side to him and let Esmerade requit his love too. Thanks for writing this. Definitely one of my favourite!

Really lovely story. Definitely one of my faves. I laughed, I nearly cried, and I was on the edge of my seat but so happy that it was a happy ending. :D

cool story

great story! i was pretty confused at one point, when darien seemed so comfortable being dead after only having been dead for like, an hour, but it all became clear when you explained it later. great job again!

OK, so I started reading this story, not expecting it to be much, but hoping to be able to critique and give advice on your writing style. I'll admit, I'm not much of a writer, but I have helped a few friends finish final drafts of publications, from magazines to novels. I was blown away by this story. I love how the characters interacted, the love between Darien and Serena being so strong that it transcended life itself. The realm of the dead was fantastically written and well thought out, I started to believe in the world you created.

By the way, my fave episode of Sailor Moon id Ep 69 (English version), my husband hates that I can watch the one episode over and over :D

I couldn't stop to comment along the way, because I sat down and read it from start to finish. It's like a great book, I just couldn't put it down.

I can't wait to read more of your work, and thank you for bringing such amazing creativity to what can be a pretty boring world!