This is very good. Jacob's ploy to get Bella to kiss him isn't right, but he is young and desperate and thinks he is in love. He realizes she is going to choose Edward but he doesn't quit. This was good, Edward's maturity and patience because he knew Bella would marry him, Jacob's frustration that Bella couldn't just let him go.

I have read this -the tent version- so many times but this is actually the best ever! I simply love it! Amazing and beautiful! Great job hon

Thanks for another perspective on one of my favourite Twilight moments.

Hello -

I have just read this and really enjoyed it - I thought you did such a good job with the characters of both Jake and Edward. Bella is meant to be with Edward no doubt, but I do have Switzerland tendencies - so this was lovely to read.

I like AU and Canon and it is hard to find something that really would fit into the novels like I believe this would.

The 'tent scene' is about my favourite one in the whole series and it was lovely to see it done justice here.

Thank-you very much - your one-shot was a real treat for me this morning!

I absolutely love this ff! You captured the characters perfectly! Keep writing!

This was actually one of my favorite parts of the story, after I thought about it. The choice she makes here... makes so much sense to me, it makes so much sense that she would love Jacob, and still it wouldn't be enough. I think it taught me that where love is concerned, everything else fades away. Just love as much as you can, and never hold yourself back. As much as I hated the fact that everyone would be so hurt, I was actually really glad Bella fell for Jacob.

Ahh...poor Jacob. I don't see why everyone hates him so much. Sure, he was a jerk in Eclipse, but so what? Everyone makes mistakes, you know? Anyway, great job on both Jacob and Edward's POV!

big fan of jacob myself but i'm all for bella and edward.

eddie was right - jacob is a pup. he does love her, but edward really loved her. there's a difference and you captured it.

i think this was brilliant. really amazing Switzerland. ;)

Awsome story!

Wow. You're an amazing author. Gosh, you did their POV's so well. The Fire and Ice chapter is one of my favorites and I always wanted to know what Jake was thinking and you made it quite believable and entertaining. Great job!

wow, well done!

Great story. This is actually my favorite scene from all 4 books, so I was very happy to read another take on it. Love the fact that you are pov's are written very well and I liked both the opening and closing lines.I also enjoyed seeing 'the kiss' from Jpov and the fact that he is going to let Edward see it when he passes him on the way to the fight was very interesting. Thanks

Hey!

Amazing story you have! I loved it. D

ohh, and I loved it best because I FINALY FOUND ANOTHER "Switzerland" GIRL! D

AHAUHAUHAUHAU

I always wanted to read a Switzerland fanfic, but I never found them... untill now, that is. Your story is amazing, I loved it. Congrats!

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Switzerland to forever! D

Cheers!

Another awesome one.

Thank you!