This was very somber, and very tranquil. The way you wrote it accompanies those moods very well, I think. The flower mentions and anecdotes throughout the drabble are a very nice touch, giving the whole a reminscent, sparkly feeling to it.

Yes, sparkly.

I don't think I've read anything focusing on the sisterly bonds between Menardi and Karst, or for that matter, anything involving much of them at all really. I think this was a great tribute to some of the unsung characters in the game and was surpringly deep for something written in only twenty minutes. Well done.

Very good. I've always liked the Proxians.

The flower symbolises how they feel about their parents? Sweet touch!

Nice job. I don't think I've ever read a Menardi first-person fic; the Proxians tend to not get as much love. I hadn't thought of the Puelle connection before, kudos on finding that.