| Reviews for Heartless |
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Suzu the Black Cat chapter 9 . 3/28/2015 Do Fairytale Plaese - |
Guest chapter 15 . 9/11/2014 Oh my your a genius having Ahiru losing her heart I hope you can find the time to finish this story cause its just beautiful. |
blueberryhope chapter 15 . 10/22/2013 I must say, this caught my attention and it is one of my favorites. Usually I don't like OCs, but this story made each of the characters likeable or intriguing to say the least. The other characters are in-character and I liked your take on their thoughts and opinions. Especially when Autor wants to be out of character and Fakir are remembering about Princess Tutu. Poor Ahiru, I hope Elise finds more of her heartshards without distraction or get her heartshard of spunkyness back so Ahiru can defend herself. (Bet it will annoy all the boys though lol) Thank you for the lovely story, I know you probably have a lot going on with your life so take your time. As long as it ends well, this fandom is very understanding. (Aka don't be like Drosselmyer leaving this unfinished or your characters will jump out of the book and will stop listening to you) ;D |
LokxSophie chapter 9 . 3/19/2013 I like:Confusion & Distain,Whispers,Fairytale. |
Guest chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 PLEASE! POST ANOTHER ONE! I can't bear the suspense! Sorry if i spelled bear wrong!;p |
OrphndAcct chapter 15 . 7/18/2012 Ahiru! Oh, what's going to happen to her? Fakir, you are too adorable! Kyaaa! Xd What do these other characters do for the story! Ah, such an interesting plot! Lovely. |
Diabolical Kitsutora chapter 5 . 3/29/2012 I did a quick search on "betsuni" and I believe you spelled it right. From the site I used it means "not particularly", or, "nothing." You hear it a lot from characters like Inuyasha from Inuyasha (well duh!) and Kyo from Fruits Basket. ANYWAY! I am enjoying your fanfic so far, I love how the roles are reversed and now Ahiru is the one who has lost her heart. Also, I love the depiction of Ahiru and Tutu being two different people sharing the same body. It was a unique way of describing their relationship. Other than a few grammar issues, it was very awesome. Keep up the good work. ( : |
Epiphany Paige chapter 15 . 12/22/2011 Muah, I feel bad for not reviewing every single chapter, but I just had to keep hitting the NEXT button :D I love the story so far, although there are some grammar mistakes. But I especially love the way you put the funny in with the suspense/mystery stuff. Please update soon, I swear I'll review the next chapter ASAP :D |
princesstutueternal chapter 9 . 12/14/2011 I like this story a lot. I really like the first two story ideas the best. The cross-dressing Ahiru rooming with Fakir and the Samurai no Baka. That one would be very interesting to see |
princesstutueternal chapter 2 . 11/18/2011 I really like this story of yours. What language are Jaegar and Kaethe's names? |
Seqka711 chapter 14 . 11/11/2011 it's a nice story, (although line breaks would be nice) and it's a shame you haven't updated your story in years... if you continue I'll draw a picture :) nah you probably won't update still. but the offer is up. |
13LuckyWishes chapter 2 . 1/17/2011 I started to re-watch Princess Tutu the other day, and something about it made me remember this fic. I have to say I completely forgot how *good* it is. I mean, really really good. All of the memories of the awesomeness that takes place in later chapters are coming back. Other than some proofing needed in terms of sentence structure there's nothing much I can pick apart here. The story beginning each chapter still mystifies me, but maybe I'll catch on this read through. Hopefully so. As for updates, I realize about your house fire a while back, so I won't ask for any. ... Even though it's hard to resist. In any case, if you ever DO get around to continuing this little gem I'll hug you, kay? |
obsessiveicequeen chapter 9 . 6/18/2010 i just look at these plots u left in chapter nine. i love all of them. r u going to try to write them? Cant wait 4 update for this story too! |
lksdjflaksdjflkasdflkajsdflka chapter 14 . 4/20/2010 Muse-chan! Where are you? How do I know you'll even be getting this! Please, PLEASE respond if you get this. This is by far my favorite story on the whole site. Please update! It's so creative... I would've never thought of this plot, and even if I did I wouldn't write it in fear I would ruin it or the plot would scare me in general. The last time you've updated anything was last year. Not only do I fear the gatherin dust on your wonderful plots but for you in particular. Are you okay? Please at least respond! .xLittleMissReality |
AmaryMei chapter 8 . 12/9/2009 Ohh! I think your sister meant Dresden City in Germany. I have that exact same city in my group's story [doujinshi] as part of a character background. I was actually resisting the urge to review because I know this'll probably not get read in a while, of course I understand the hiatus and its nature - but I look forward to finishing this story. Heehee. _ |