This story was too painful

So much angst

I never thought I would be sympathizing over sibling lovers, but here I am. Haha. I don’t think many Fan Fiction writers would be able to accomplish what you just did with this story, and I think that really speaks volume about your writing abilities. This story blew my mind. It was incredibly sad, but also beautifully written. Setting the sibling issue aside, there’s a very sad truth to life that one can take away from this story. Two people can love eachother unconditionally, but that doesn’t mean that things always work out and your best hope is that it can in the next life. I think in your own way you really captured the struggle of real life relationships. Thank you for writing. This story was worth the read.

I am incredibly angry right now, so its not a good idea for me to criticise this story in this moment.

this was sad, yet in a very beautiful way. up until now, i still cry whenever i remember the scenes from this fic...

Going too fast.

You have chosen one forbidden topic to start this fiction. I hope to track down the story woven through this.

I can't review anything about this chapter. It's way too complicated.

and this chapter broke me twice also.

This chapter totally became a surprising mystery.

This one broke my heart with the brick of tears.

It was like a movie playing in theatre in front of me.

that's totally fucked up. but I stopped caring by the fourth chapter cuz it's so coherent and logical at the same time. Fuck, the ANGST.

brava.

I feel so depressed T-T

Bbwwwwwaaaaabhhh soooo sadddd! Sooo forbidden! But!, i see a next chapter! ; )