This story is so awesome! I beg of you, please update. You cannot leave your story like that with many faithful readers waiting for more! Love it so far. 〜（ゝ。）

NNNOOOOOOO! How could you kill off Roy? D":

I think this story is actually really great (especially since we all love us some Ed-torture x3), but there's a lot of EnvyxTii Len... I thought this was about Edward and Envy mostly? ; Sorry if I'm wrong, I was just wondering...

I still hope that you update soon, though, I wanna see what happens!

aw man. serious cliffhanger. I can't wait to read the next one.

i was curious, was there a story for what happened before chapter one of Plus wo Minus 1?

Nice two chapters! I really loved reading them.

You did a great job with them!

I look forward to the next chapter.

~YukinoKara

So.

I hate it. jk, jk. You know that I never could, I just wanted to try to make a harsh review...

Anyways,

Poor Tii Len... always hurting herself. Hopefully, Envy will help her wounds heal faster. *hands a suspiciously large box over, THROUGH THE INTERNET!*

~loves from Jeli, and cirrus

(whom I didn't almost forget in the last review...)

Post Script

Though, I just read at the bottom *you won't be able to see it now...* that I'm supposed to offer tips for improvement...

So, I wants to see more Envy fluff. There. That's my tip. .

K, hon...you need to make a decision between first and third person. For serious. XP It's confusing and it ruins the flow if you constantly switch between them. Now that that's out of the way, I'm not exactly sure where this is going - I kind of liked the EnvyxOC thing, but it's being dragged out. When's the plot going to come back? Killing Yui was an okay decision developing the story, but to be honest you never established his character to begin with, so I didn't really care when you suddenly and bloodily killed him off. Why does Tii Len like Envy anyway? 8/ He's been nothing but nasty to her and Ed all through the fic. Unless she has weird masochistic desires or something. Sure, he's good looking in his 'cute' form I'd assume (why else would anyone read this?) but a relationship needs more than that. I don't know, maybe I'm missing something.

Okay. :) Criticisms over. Other than that, I'm still liking this, and impatient about the next chapter. So update soon and please don't think this was harsh at all, because that wasn't the intention and it's really all just based on my own gripes. XD

-Tara

So. I can't remember my password, so you'll just have to accept that this anonymous review is mine.

a little bit of critique, ("I really am, but … I have to go. I need to know if big brought is alive …”) I'll have to go through and read it again, but I think that might be wrong, correct me if it's not.

ENVY! omg. Your fluff is always well written... especially when it involves envy - Hopefully, there will be more where that came from. *pats head*

The bell's gonna go, so I'll probably send another one later.

~Jeli

loves from Cirrus too

Tia!

It's so nice to finally have time to read the newest chapter! It makes me so happy... although...

~Jeli

P.S.

Joker loves you

An update! -beyond happy-

Great chapter! I can see it play out in my mind's eye. Which means you describe it well.

You're doing a good job with this!

I look forward to the next chapter.

~YukinoKara

This is really interesting D

I think I'm hooked on this story. Yes, yes I am.

Good luck with later chapters.

~YukinoKara, the insane monster

Dude please type and add more yaoi action. Please, please, please! Also I kind of missed the chapter numbers being in Japanese.

GAH you must continue this story!

*kowtows to your greatness* Edvy is the best, wait Envy seme...Evnward?

anyway it rocks and i'm a fanbo..uh girl _

omg wheres the rest of it xD I was getting soo good Lol I hope you update soon xP