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Why yugi so naive and easy to deceive. Stupid female (lots of words that are not pleasant).

in the ending notes I think you ment to say when one part ends and another begins but you put when one part begins and another part begins. nice job

so the dad did recoqnise kiba ok good

nice :)

didn't jou sinor already meet kiba in the first story

not just gay guys but gay girls two the girl who hit on him in the first story lol is she coming back?

I thought the anzu and jou conversation was written well

nice

I lov the end of this chapter so funny

thanks for the end notes I kinda want ryou to show up now

I like but id like better if the name were yami atem insetead

very nice begining

i love this story my name is deana how do i start doing this

immensely entertaining