Please please update. I've read this a few years back on another site and I couldn't stop thinking about it and around to dig it out. I really want to know how the story proceeds, it's such a captivating and engaging story

I really love this story. I know it's been quite a few years since you've worked on it, but if you ever do write more, I'll be waiting to read it.

There's something about Lors that I don't 100% trust.

I love Gravitation, Yuki and shuichi are so cute together. I also love the fanfic it's really great.

Okay, this is a very interesting start, but I have a question: when do you believe that Draco tried to kill Harry? I honestly can't think of so much as one time. Expelled, yes; hurt, definitely, but never killed. The closest they came to killing each other was the duel in the bathroom in HBP.

I knew it, the moment that I learned that Listerman was a Necromancer, I knew they were going to use Draco's body to bring back Voldemorte. Obviously Blaise and Pansy don't know, right? Please update soon, I really want to read more and see the end result. Harry and Draco haven't kissed yet! (The one with Harry as part cat and Draco half asleep don't count) I look forward to the next you update this story!

ohhhhh h write more. this is seriously getting more interesting!

I have to say, I don't like your OC. I'm sorry, and before you take offense I'd like to defend my point with some logic. You can either agree or disagree. It is your fiction afterall, but I think it's something to keep in mind when you write more.

1) Unnecessary. The OC is plays a role that can be easil filled by one or two other preexisting characters. Though Luna is a year younger than the other three, it would be easy for her to become a closer part to their group.

2) Scene stealer. While she's in the scene the focus is solely on her. She's the special one with the special potions, the funky attitude, the unique clothes and the detatchment to the society. While she's in the scene Harry Potter is no longer the main character. This doesn't mean that the scene can't be in her point of view, but she cannot overshadow the main character as a sid character.

3) Inconsistent for convenience sake. This is mainly a flaw in her character design. You said that she grew up in Japan untill very recently. While I can understand the perfect English since she is half English, it makes no sense that she would ask to call everyone by their first names. In Japan only family, very close friends and lovers are allowed to call each other by their first names. Unless she was reclusive and had no friends and only stayed with her parents then she would definitely be used to being called by her last name more than her first name, especially by strangers. If she was indeed reclusive she would no doubt have some social shortcomings.

I hope you're not offended, I just like to point such things out. Too often are OCs used as convient ways to circumnavigate something that would work equally as well without the OC, but woul take more effort, and almost all the time an OC is just a projection of the writer into the story, which in itself is fine, but it leads into the dangrous area of having the OC outshine the main character.

With that being said the rest of the fiction is pretty nice and I'm interested and continuing to read it. Who knows, maybe I'll come to like the OC, though I doubt it.

Well, damn girl. ;) You're back. I find it ironic how both of us remained inactive for almost exactly the same amount of time. Yesterday was the first time I visited in almost a year. And I noticed you'd updated, which was a pleasant surprise. Although, I have to admit, I needed to reread the entire fic in order for the new chapter to make sense to me. '

Pleasure to read your work again, I must say! :) You've certainly maintained your fine skills in writing during your absence.

I'm definitely looking forward to see what happens next. I might be older and super-mature now, but that does NOT mean I'm not eagerly awaiting smex. ;) Give it to me. NOW, I SAY.

*HUGS*

So I just found your story and read it all, I like it a lot. It seems to me that your following the plot of the book quite well, and therefore I just wanted to know why you decided to keep Hedwig alive?

How much do you know about Japan? Of course she would be used to people useing her last name. Only close friends or family would use her first name. She would also be very used to suffixes.

Also they only use last names in Harry Potter when they are mad at someone or if they don't get along with them. The trio are on first names terms as soon as they met anyone that wasn't older then them or in slythrin.

It would be a normal thing to call her by her first name and for her to not be used to it.

Do some reasearch.

Dear God, please update soon! I don't thin I'll be able to survive long without one! ;)

:D hope soon the update!

plz update soon!

I found and started to read this fic on Aarin, yes, I love it that much, and yes, that's the name I use there. When I saw that it hadn't been updated in forever, I figured that the rest of it just had to be here. I was right, to a degree. First off, I just want to say that this story is positively amazing. It gives a wonderful and believable portrayal of both Harry and Draco. The two of them trying to fix everything between each other is just... beautifully done. I love Draco's extreme awkwardness, and Harry's stubbornness. Oh please, please, please, do update this fic. It is way too good to just die!