Wow this was really good! The whole thing was so sad and I really enjoyed reading it all. It was really sad to read about Light’s deterioration and I was so close to tears when L thought Light was back. Aaaahhh this was incredible!

I JUST CRIED SO HARD

This was brutal. It was fascinating and horrible at the same time wondering what the next visit would entitle, seeing Raito's decline was heartbreaking and ugh, these two. I love how you incorporated Dante's Inferno and I enjoyed the push and pull of their antagonistic and affectionate and back to antagonistic regard for each other. Riveting tale, thank you for writing.

that was crazy and amazing. i love it

this is so beautiful. it's sad and heartbreaking but indeed beautiful I love it so much omfg

Oh wow this was absolutely heartbreaking. My goodness. Every word you selected was perfect and this was such an artful piece. Thank you so much for this.

one of the best L X Raito stories I've read in years. what I loved the most about this fanfic is the fact that you didn't developed L and Raito's relationship in an out of character way for the plot in your story to work. well done!

Wow, fantastic! No wonder you have so many reviews. Well done.

Ahhhhhh im crYing

This was marvelously sad; the deterioration of Lights mind, in particular...

It's so sad to read Light falling apart, and you write the breakdown beautifully, for both of them. I loved reading about the chains and their forgiveness, L's realization about Light being Kira and Light's telling him that L beat him by hours. The handmade Deathnote's and L Lawliet everywhere just about killed me, it hurt to read. Great job! And see, now I'm inspired to read Dante's Inferno, and that's great too.

That was fantastic.

I totally adored this.

absolutely breathtaking...

suchagoodficsogladifoumdthisomigoshilovethisthxsomuchforwritingit!

I don't know why but I cried when I read this. It's so beautifully dark and sad and I couldn't help myself. This is going to be one of my favourites, that will probably take over my thoughts for a little while. Thank you for making such a heart-wrenching story.

I really like your stuff. This is the first time I've attempted read L and Yagami fanfiction, and I'm actually really enjoying these. Thank goodness they aren't fluffy, I think that is the main reason I was afraid of looking up fics for them. Anyway, I've read most of your stories, and even though I'm not very good at leaving reviews I wanted you to know that I'm enjoying them. Also, it was really nice to see a C.S. Lewis quote. Not to many people even seem to know who he is anymore. :)