Reviews for The Royal Duty
Blind Faerie of the Brooke chapter 8 . 7/2/2010
It need to have more. I NEED MORE.
Hocapontas chapter 8 . 2/4/2009
Is there a sequel to this? If not, I hope you write one.
Hocapontas chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
You got the idea from Darien doing that exact same thing to Rini and Selena. It was great but, does this mean that Brian and Hitomi are somehow related?
Inda chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
He's her Brother right! well keep it rolling.
Inda chapter 6 . 1/11/2008
;0 keep it coming! !
Anony-Chick chapter 6 . 1/10/2008
Hey, you did add quotation marks! But you know, I still think you need to make more use of the commas.
Anony-Chick chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Can you say "quotation marks"?

Periods and commas never hurt, either.
Inda chapter 5 . 1/1/2008
keep it coming. What is Van woried about? have faith Van!
Shadowwolf403 chapter 4 . 12/31/2007
dude that was intense, totally not what i was expecting... it kicked ass :) can't wait for the next one
Inda chapter 4 . 12/31/2007
oohh my that's interesting keep it coming!
Inda chapter 3 . 12/26/2007
keep it coming!
sousie chapter 3 . 12/25/2007
update soon
sousie chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
a litle short but it was good

update soon
Inda chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
well very interesting. kind of hard to know when they talk to thinking in their mind. " " those are what you need for them to talk. keep it coming. agging you to my list keep it up!
sousie chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
update