Fantastic! *loudly clapping*

Why is the title "Grotesque?" This was pure fücking beauty! This might be one of the best AU one shots I've read about this pairing on here. I love how accepting they were of each other, it just shows how amazing their relationship is. This just made me love this pairing even more now. Still my second favourite yaoi pairing, TykiAllen!

Hello, I really liked your fic, my favorite couple is LavixAllen are so cute and hot, hopefully do more fics of them, keep it up, thanks and kisses.

Wow! I truly enjoyed reading this, thank-you for writing it. You are an amazing author.

That was a wonderful story on Lavi and Allen. Even though it was AU I still felt that it was the same characters we were used to reading about. You did a great job. :)

so sweet! 3 3 i love it owo

that was so very sweet, with the 'deformity' comparison. i so love this pairing. good job!

awesome!

i like the plot idea!

-Red

Two not-so-perfect people with their own distinct insecurities... able to understand and accept each other because of them.

Love that idea. :D

/uv nk

Very, very nicely done. I enjoyed it greatly :D

wow! that was awesome! the descriptions were very...um...realistic too! Enjoyed all of it!

Keep up the good job!

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thats good that lavi and allen accepted each other

I just wrote a comment for your "On her special day", so, typically, I don't have anything more to write.

But still, I want to. This give me the same warm feeling like your other fic, you made my day *squeal*

Love to see more of your work.

Bai bai