I personally love all Temari pairings because they make the story quite interesting but Sasuke being loyal to Konoha bums me out.

Have you ever watched Naruto or read the anime? I don't think you have. Stop writing fictions based on fandoms you know nothing about.

Damn I really thought dude

It was an OK story at best. The flow and pacing needs work.

TWIST ENDING IS EBIC

It was very well written I especially love the traditional Japanese wedding ceremony it was great for one of you young uns

this is really shitty,almost non of these events are after shippuden.

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I know why you wrote the story so short story had potential oc character Sakura and just might it will never happen

I like what you did with the story and you look up traditional Japanese weapons and I like what you did and it was very good okay so you exaggerate the Bridesmaids that's okay I think other than that I'd like to get extraordinary you and some other fanfic writers who like to Naruto and Temari you can have someone assist you like AP Edwards or the one who wrote Naruto political Alliance wedding I forgot his name sorry you guys work the other one that you guys would be good job and thank you for this fanfic look for two more chapters I got to go my cat's has nunchucks out again

Note to self into a corner her that kind of stinks note to self go back and rewrite so you can correct the problem that might help you want suggestions I'd be more than happy to take for example the Japanese don't eat eggs and bacon for breakfast look up Japanese tradition weddings and breakfasts is in might help if not just be vague about the breakfast small suggestion because the story has potential if you go back and correct it thank you

well, is about destiny but maybe Naruto and Temari can love eachother...
The question is if they can realize what they feel?

Phew! Talk about a heart attack. Thought Temari died or something. Love it.

you really haven't watched much of shippuden have you? Near the end of shippuden the 5 great ninja nations come together and make peace with each other. there is not supposed to be any violence between the nations anymore.

none of this is accurate. Temari was well aware that Naruto was a Jinchuriki in the original series before Shippuden. Also, this whole chapter was just awkward. I expect better in future chapters...