I love this story...
it is one of the best stories that I've ever read...
Hope you will write more like this.

way too much like star wars, but i like it

This is getting way toooo much like star wars. with force concept and shit

yep stupid council

I'm reading this story for the second time and enjoying it again. I love the plot. The only thing that bothers me is the bad grammar. Pretty much every instance of your/you're is wrong. Also several instances of they're, their, there being used incorrectly. In addition to that, there are multiple instances that I've noticed where it seems like you are missing part of a sentence so that it is very choppy to read.

Also this is just a pet peeve of mine and not super important, but 'thru' is slang and shouldn't ever be used in any type of book or story unless talking about a drive thru. It should always be 'Through'. Having someone else to look over this story and fix some of those mistakes would go a long way towards bringing this story from a 6 or 7/10 to a 10/10.

it namikaze not kazama for kami's sake kazama was fine as it was a fanon name until we learned the fourth's name and some author's refuse to use it cause it sounds stupid to them ughhhhh. it frustrating you know what fine lets screw canon names after all it doesn't matter to the fans who like canon materials in fanfiction like facts and the like. sorry its a pet peeve of mine when this happens at least you use the actual name and this was accidental misspelling oh and the same goes for arashi instead of minato.

I was enjoying this until the last two chapters what in the fuck is wrong with you I mean seriously blood brothers

Could you suck the Uchiha’s cock even more you gave the OC a blade that only he can use but you allowed that fucktard to take Naruto’s

LOL i bet that was kami smacking him

I can't believe I'm saying this I would kinda l wants to live in this underveres of yours

This was great. I do get the feeling you were going to continue it as it was but just decided to throw in a Dogma movie reference and wipe it to begin a sequel

Pantera claws more like Vega from street fighter. He used those

Seriously? 69 chapters and that's how you end it? Kami pushes the reset button?
FUCK that

Re: your rant at end of Chap. 10

A spaceship that runs on kittens? Are you talking fuel source for engines or using like hamsters in a wheel for genarators?

if naruto doesn't want to be found then no one is going to find his ramen loving ass akatsuki included