Reviews for Teaching Mona
Nika8 chapter 7 . 11/11/2016
Well, I enjoyed this thoroughly. Thanks for sharing it.
I'm guessing you don't plan on continuing this story, so you might as well mark it 'complete'...
Concolor44 chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
I stopped believing in coincidence a few decades ago.

Tonight, interspersed with the later chapters of this story, I read (at my wife's behest) a truly EXCELLENT article by Mark Manson (find him on Facebook ... you won't regret it) called "Love is Not Enough". It is brilliant, and is most perfectly suited to the characters in your beautiful tale. And beautiful it is. I don't think I've ever seen another reference to the minor characters from The Divine Comedy in a piece of fan-fiction. And so achingly apt! Kudos!

These are the Three Harsh Truths About Love:
1. Love does not equal compatibility.
2. Love does not solve your relationship problems.
3. Love is not always worth sacrificing yourself.

What this means is that, although Trent can Rock Her World, that is one of the few common points they have, and a deep relationship requires more than that. She's quite a bit more cerebral than he. He's more artistic than she. He shouldn't have to give up his music for her; she shouldn't have to give up going to college for him.

They've got three months to figure all this out. I hope they can do so, and still part on good terms.

Following the HELL out of this.
Concolor44 chapter 6 . 11/29/2014
Tom's history. He just doesn't know it yet.

Which is a real shame, because Daria and Trent are UTTERLY unsuited for a life together.
Concolor44 chapter 5 . 11/29/2014
Hmm. Guilt. Guilt is corrosive. It will eat through just about any defense one cares to put up.
Concolor44 chapter 3 . 11/29/2014
That's a tough place for Daria to be.

Did she do the "right thing"? Eh ... probably not. Not in conventional terms. Tom is going to know, once they've made love, that he wasn't her first. Therefore he is going to know that she lost her virginity very recently. How will he feel about this? I fear that, perhaps, his level of maturity is not quite as, ah ... developed as she imagines. I believe he will be livid, and feel betrayed and hurt ... harmed, even.

Really interested in where you're going with this.
TheQueenofBooks1000 chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
This is seriously adorable. Excellent job, fellow writer. :D
Guest chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
This is the best Daria/Trent i've read
mudpuddledemon chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
Awesomely satisfying, if a little wordy. Excellent.
Katrina117 chapter 7 . 9/4/2012
This is a surprisingly sweet story, really well written too. Since you haven't updated in almost 5 years, I won't bother to ask for more, but, in any case, I do hope you keep writing, you have a lot of talent.
deathrosekitty chapter 7 . 8/6/2012
Aww. I'm so sad.
deathrosekitty chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
I think he should be the one by her side.
deathrosekitty chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
Wow, i think that Daria should sneak into trent's room.
deathrosekitty chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
I was hoping she'd go to trent.
deathrosekitty chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
Wouldn't tom just ask jane and find out the lie?
deathrosekitty chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Oh my goodness I loved this. I can't believe Trent made the first move
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