Jin as Miroku's reincarnation is...interesting. I can dig it. XD
Honestly glad there was just a pairing for Sango x Jin.

The fic was great and I loved it

I ADORE this fanfiction of yours. I have never seen a pairing like JinSango and...well, it's just wonderful the way you write it. I love it! Great work!

That was as satisfying as well, as a cup of Starbucks on a bitter morning. (High praise, lady, let me tell you!)

Perfect. Abso-frigging-lutely perfect. You should see the fat smile on my face and the very vocal "Awn!" at the end. Talk about WAFF's. And the very realistic portrayal of the fact that you have to WORK on your happily ever after. I love the simplicity of how you described the troubles they had concerning their relationship over the past year. Jin's doubts were heartfelt, but I literally SAW Sango look up at him when Inuyasha asked her if she was sure.

Damn, that was awesome.

This is one of the most well-written things I've ever had the luck to read. Not only is it well-written but it also includes one of my favorite characters, Jin, and keeps all the characters completely in character.

Aw... this was such a *pretty* story to read, the word doesn't fit in but that's what I thought and goodness me, the ending was surprising. Wonderful work

My God...

...That was beautiful. I don't even think you understand how beautiful that was. I didn't see it coming from the beginning, but started to pick up on it towards the end of the second chapter. I absolutely love the connection and how you made it work. Everyone was on par, you've captured so many personalities in such a small space. Seeing Inuyasha and Sango's exchange, that was perfect. And that scene between Hiei and Sango... no words, really.

Beautiful. Just... incredible.

You don't even know how much I miss you. Come back to me soon, mmkay?

Much love,

Moon Step

I don't think I truly knew how hectic life could be until I came to college. Chaos descended on me then, in both wonderful and terrible ways. The last month in particular has been absolutely crazy, from being feverish for over two weeks while having midterms and papers, right on to having some personal matters I've been struggling to deal with.

Today was one of those less than wonderful days and nothing seemed to be able to change that, even things that normally cheer me up. And then I remembered an email I received a few days ago. This seemed like a perfect opportunity to go read an old friend's story.

...I've told you how much I love you before, right? I'm sure I have, but I think it stands to be said again: You're awesome and I love you.

Okay, strong words, haha, but nonetheless true. I've been so far from writing lately, haven't written anything, haven't read anything in any form that's not a textbook. But you never fail to remind me not only why I love reading, but how much I love these characters, which I sometimes forget. Honestly, I don't think anyone can write them quite like you can, and capture their personalities so well. It blows me away each time I read it.

I know I’ve read this first chapter before, but it’s been so long, I reread it. Sighh, do I love Jin/Sango… and you’re the cause of that in the first place! And no one could ever pull it off, but you. The Touya/Jin interaction is brilliant, but what really gets me is the last part. Seeing the dynamic between Hiei and Sango through Jin’s eyes, and his jealousy… I don’t even know how to describe it. It gives me chills!

Alright, on to read the next chapter(s)! Can't wait!

*clapping*

That was great! D I think I felt a bit teary there near the end.

Oh.

This is was absolutely beautiful. This moved me in so many different ways it would be impossible to describe or explain. But I'll try.

First off, I love the Inuyasha-Sango interaction. The quiet fighter's camaraderie, and the understanding. Everything they said and didn't say that just highlighted their relationship behind the scenes that I know must go on, but never get to see.

Sango and Hiei, perfect chaos. The way they're so wonderfully bad for each other is completely explained in this. Two absolutely shattered individuals who try to fix each other only to find pieces of themselves lying on the floor. I'm actually really happy you didn't go for this pairing.

Sango and Jin. *squee* I am so happy it went this way. I love the adorkable way Jin was so squeamish about others knowing about his feelings for Sango and everything was so in character from his accent to his mannerisms to EVERYTHING. It felt like cannon. And that goes for everyone, actually.

You know those stories that make you just sigh with happiness and make everything good while your reading it and for a little bit after? Yea, this was it. Loved it.

Oh my god. I've been crying since the beginning. What pain she has...oh Sango. Oh, you poor darling. I'm taking deep breaths now just so I can type. Guyute, Lady, holy spit. Damn. I mean...just...Damn.

I cannot believe the emotions this chapter evoked within me, such joy and such sadness and such empathy and such tenderness and laughter. Because you managed to convey so much with this one. Egawd, where to begin?

First of all, Jin's accent. You hardly needed any advice-you have it dead on, down to the nuances of tenor and syllable. I actually was reading Jin aloud, between sniffles, LOL. And what sweetly beautiful, touchingly aching, wondrously terrible and just so perfect words. You have such a talent for that! I stand in awe of how you convey so much with single words or sentences or phrases. Damn. And you have the characters so damn dead on, it's scary. Your intuition-fabulous. Just fabulous.

And the way you can evoke emotions-I was choking back sobs over Hiei and Sango's scene, when they kissed, and then burst out laughing over that descriptive phrase of an elephant in panty hose. HAHAAHA. I chuckling now. Oh, that was perfect imagery. You have such a talent for that, too! And the way it's just so simply, elegantly put and addressed...it flows so nicely, without pause, for there I was back to tears falling down my face reading on as Hiei confronted Jin, and when he went to her, to see her broken like that. Oh, Jin. And sanctuary-how apt. How simply apt.

This, my Lady, was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Truly.

Thank you for sharing it.

Fate

Oh My Gods I wanna know what he got her! the suspense is killing me! I

Totally loving this story! D They're in character, the grammar/spelling is spot on (and if there are mistakes I totally mised them P) the story's pace is great! If Jin's supposed to be who I think he's supposed to be then you'd've made my day. X) Keep it up!

im guessing its monks beads. perfect for the situation. keep up the good work, im looking forward to chapter 3

So Jin IS Miroku's reincarnation then? I hope they could share, for I'm a major fan of Hiei, but Jin seems so perfect (and obviously the protagonist) in this story.