If you come back to this story... please finish. It's really very good and now I am hooked. You should finish it.

I love this so much *.*

I liked this a lot. Johnny was in character for the most part and the fight scenes were really gorey and epic. I kinda wish it would continue, but if it did it would probably turn into some kind of nasty romance fest that made Johnny look soft. I HATE THOSE.

I know it has been a while since you updated but PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! This story is great and love how it blends naturally with the comic. Be sure to bring all JTHM in this fanfic as well as new OCs! Update please or my head will explode!

This is one of the BEST stories I have ever read! I hope there will be more chapters! I would have reviewed every single chapter... but that's quite a few reviews if I do say so myself... :) I'm hopeful that you will make more chapters, really excited actually! :D :D

I REVIEWED I REVIEWED I REVIEWED! post another super long chapter please, don't leave it in suspense! STORY just *sniffles* TO DANG AWSOME *blowing nose with hanky* you sure know how tah keep it rolling great, using lovely details from yo creative mind (-set) *crying hysterical* CONTINUE or I'll get Nny to attack yah xD

Okay, I know you haven't updated in over a year *:( * but please update!
Even if only to write a rushed end chapter!
Too many stories go unfinished! Id rather have a crappy ending than a cliff hanger!
... anyways, you said youre intdrested in web comics? (Well at least in 2011)
Id suggest Trying Human (Tryinghuman. Com) and *dreamscar (dream-scar. Net) and Romantically Apocalyptic (its on deviantart. Com)
But ESPECIALLY Trying Human. The author is happy to make all kinds of non-cannon fan art for the fans, livestreams when shes working on a new page and has a tumblr, twitter, and a devianart with extra amazing stuff

oh...my...GOD WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! IT'S 2012 ALREADY C'MON! love your story bye!

This story is so amazing! I hope you make more chapters.

I think this is great! You capture Johnny's personality perfectly! (Hey, alliteration!) I feel my stomach tense with excitment and fear when Johnny has that "crazed grin" on his face, just like the way it does when I read the comics: this is what I REALLY like about it! You, ma'am, are awesome!

I don't believe you realize how absolutely genius this story is! I've fallen in love with it and I want to- no I need to read more! I love this story to bits and pieces, I'm inspired to do fan art... I'm just absolutely in love with this... Did I mention I love this story? Its well written, clever, dark, funny, and just an absolute blast to read! I love love love love love love love it!

Lol the last line reminded me of come to the dark side we have cookies. XD

Oh...I so want to kill Nathan! Ughh...

:'( Poor Squee! Oh my gosh!

Aww..poor Danny! I really like her background story.